Walk With Nature - Places Contest

Walk with me along a dusty path,
Through a curtain of weeping willows,
Where water laps against the bank, 
Forget –me-not’s in the grass, like pillows.

Duckling snuggle amongst these flowers
Gently pecking at the leafy mould.
Swans walk serenely with crossed toes
Head arched in a majestic pose.

Come sit with me and enjoy the view
The lake glistens in a sunny haze
The coot dodges in and through
the willow as we gaze

The greedy seagulls snatch the food
That children throw with much glee. 
Canadian geese fly in and intrude
On the ducks and swans as they eat tea.

It’s a mile long, this walk we take
Passing a memorial lighthouse to Capt Scott
The place I take you is Roath Park Lake*
Come add some memories, forget it not.

•	http://cardifflocalguide.co.uk/local-guide-to-roath-park-lake.

Penned on August 21st 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/21/2014 9:48:00 AM
I visited Cardiff (U.K) way back in 1954 as I got admission in the university there for further study. I did visit some parks. I don't knowif Roath was one of them. Unfortunately I had to return back to India for some personal reasons. Thanks for a chance to recollect my memories of Cardiff. Seren
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Date: 8/21/2014 3:50:00 PM
Hi Ram wow so you know my city and country that's great. Roath Park has a lighthouse at the edge of the lake, so different now than in 1954. there are a few sites showing you lots of pictures of the park. I am sure you will enjoy seeing them....Seren
Date: 8/21/2014 7:52:00 AM
I would love to take that walk, nature is such a gift, the sounds, the smells, the animals that dwell. You created such a perfect image I feel like I am there already! Well done sweetie, best of luck in the contest, this is great :)
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Date: 8/21/2014 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, as you say the sight and smells of nature are wonderful. Though could do with out the darling seagulls that like to bomb my car.....Seren
Date: 8/21/2014 3:52:00 AM
Sounds delightful... I'll have to take a look when I get home.....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/21/2014 5:10:00 AM
Hi Tim, Thanks for stopping, yes its a great place in the middle of the city. there are a few places you can look at Roath Park Lake on line, it has a history as well. I am lucky to live a 5 minute drive from this delightful place....Seren
Date: 8/20/2014 11:37:00 PM
Super as usual....
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Date: 8/21/2014 1:32:00 AM
thanks Judy, glad you enjoyed your walk...Seren
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