Walk the Tightrope

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Edward Ibeh's This or That Vol. 29 Contest ~ December 17, 2024

Often in life, it's felt like on a tightrope I've been walking
between what is reality and what is merely an act.
The names of people in my story, I've chosen to redact,
those I've cheered on with a 'Bravo,' stood and applauded.
Protagonists who took on the role of a true-life Romeo, 
if performing in Shakespeare's Globe would've been lauded.

Sometimes, the tightrope was swaying but I held on
even when it seemed as if all chance of hope was gone.
Thoughts of loved ones prevented me from letting go.
Their names fading on the playbill, and from my tongue
when I struggled to remember them on gloomy days
like when memory took a holiday and caused me to forget
the lyrics to many of the favorite songs I'd so often sung.

But I'll not give up the stage and rage at the thief,
the scene stealer whose mask has become wrinkled.
Hair, a silver mane who causes thespians the grief
of trying to keep their balance on the high wire. 
A task which gets more difficult with each passing day.
Age is the bandit whose hands rob me of memory,
leaving me pleading, "Please, what is my next line?"
If I stumble while reciting words of a well-rehearsed play,
there'll be no ovation for a comedian who's no longer divine.
Perhaps it's time for the farewell lines I hesitate to say.

I tiptoed across the tightrope between moral and profane
trying to avoid the disaster of falling to the ground.
Usually, I've found life's realities to be more insane
than any fictional story I would label 'profound.'
Today, the stage has less appeal for me, acting far less zeal
as shadows deepen behind the curtain in each scene.
It seems my emotions engage more often, for now I feel
sorrow for those gone but who still appear in my dreams.
I've given them bouquets for playing notable parts,
sweet scented crimson roses to those who once loved me. 
Withered ones to those who knowingly wounded my heart.

I don't fear plunging from the height unless the rope has frayed.
Yes, I've teetered and trembled but on the tightrope I remained.
There, in the theatre of what's left of my life, I'll take a seat
and watch the show on center stage while others walk the wire.
When moonlight glows and winter blows blizzards of snow,
I'll recall those I've loved and lost; their memories I've saved,
although their flowers are now covered with frost upon graves.
I'll humbly walk in their footsteps but never in the limelight 
of stars gleaming in the eyes of tightrope walkers on opening night.

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Date: 12/30/2024 8:22:00 AM
I'll recall those I've loved and lost; their memories I've saved,although their flowers are now covered with frost upon graves. This was powerfully written. Yes... friends and family gone, yet remembered with love... cherished... Well done friend... Ann
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Date: 12/29/2024 3:13:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Lin. Really awesome stanzas, especially the 4th. Wow! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/19/2024 11:49:00 AM
Great analogy, Lin. Strange how somehow seem to walk that wire with barely a wobble, while others find the wire wobbling like a thing possessed. Enjoyed your well imagined view through ‘those eyes’. Best of luck. Terry
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Date: 12/20/2024 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much for your thoughts, Terry. I think it's not always the tightrope walker's fault for outside influences or influencers grab hold of the rope and try to knock us off.
Date: 12/17/2024 10:34:00 AM
Lin, you have put sensitivity and feeling into this work with charm. Your discussion about forgetting and memory has some sorrow, but at least you are aware of where you are and what is happening all around--a sign of a good mind. You give me plenty to think about. What is our place in life? Do we need to be on center stage or is it OK to observe and comment? We've all had such different experiences, but your analysis of life as a balancing act offers a perspective on what many of us have lived.
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Date: 12/17/2024 11:02:00 AM
It really is a balancing act at times. I’m not really having memory problems, but I was writing from that perspective. Thanks so much for getting it, Duke.
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