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12/12/2024 for This or That, Vol 29 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Walk the Tightrope

Feast your eyes, ladies and gents, 
on the spotlight, high up in the circus tent.  
We cross our fingers, hoping, in our fright, 
our hero stays on the tightrope tonight. 

Wait, that man's sixty-six years old,
and he has nary a muscle to behold. 
He doesn't not look so very brave
as he gives the crowd a sheepish wave.

His cholesterol is on a slippery slope -
too much butter, and he falls off the rope.
One more sweet?  Oops, his sugar level!  
Who offered it?  It was the devil. 

He's between a hard place and a rock.
Watch as he tries to put on his sock.
He's taking quite the frightening risk
of herniating another disc.

He climbs into his car with confusion.
All this traffic could lead to one more contusion.
The thought raises the pressure of his blood.
Oh my, will he fall down with a thud?

An impact of that intensity
would spell trouble with his bone density.
Each step he takes is filled with fear
as he clings to his health so dear.

Feast your eyes, ladies and gents, 
on the spotlight, high up in the circus tent.  
We cross our fingers, hoping, in our fright, 
all of us on this tightrope tonight.
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Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous musings on aging, David. Wonderful imagery! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Edward, I had fun with this one!
Greenhough Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 4:27 PM
This comparison is a wonderful way to tell a story. Aging is somewhat of a circus. I think you did a great job.
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:10 PM
Thanks - haha, I like the way you put that - a circus - lol!
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Walking the tightrope at the age of 66, he must be fit, or raving mad. Enjoyed the read David… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 9:06 AM
I think I can answer that, Beryl - he's mad! lol
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