Walk of Thoughts

A walk through the cemetary
Brings perspective to life
The dreams and goals
Washed away with they're plight.

Did they reach their goals?
Were their dreams fulfilled?
Did they pass from age
Or the danger they lived.

Are they up above,
Or down below?
A question we ask
Only one way to know.

When we go....
No matter the cause
Will our dreams go with us
Will our goals be fulfilled?
Life after death.
"Cemetary on the Hill"

Love as many things as you can
Enjoy your life
Give a helping hand-
Fulfill your dreams
Work toward your goals
for life is short.....

The memories we make
Will be passed on in life
Undo your mistakes.
Ask for forgiveness
Forgive as you must
for one day for sure,
"it will be us".

In this place
Just empty and cold
An empty shell without a soul
Up above or down below.
The life we've lived,stories passed on
A legacy we leave to be foretold
For we all have a heart and we all have a soul.

But,in the end
A soul no more
Just the life we shared
And our stories foretold......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/11/2014 10:20:00 PM
Agnes, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/4/2014 1:17:00 PM
Good piece, Agnes. welcome to Poetry-Soup. Empty shells without souls, good description for residents in the graveyards. Best to have well-laid plans for the destination of the soul before it leaves the body. Enjoyed your piece very much.
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:19:00 PM
Reason I have to agree with you, a well lived life leads us to our destination...thank you for the comment~hugs~
Date: 2/3/2014 7:37:00 PM
Your beautiful poem really had me thinking, Agnes. Amazing write!
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:41:00 PM
Hello Taha..thank you for stopping by and so glad this write inspired you somewhat.....
Date: 2/3/2014 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful and so True !
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:22:00 PM
Aruna thank you for your comment.I think its something we all have to face sooner or later....hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 8:21:00 AM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:23:00 PM
Sinclair glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much..~~hugs~~
Date: 1/29/2014 9:45:00 AM
I fell in love with this write of yours...we share similar thoughts. And Welcome to Poetry Soup my friend..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 1/31/2014 12:50:00 AM
Thank you Pace.I guess I write very simple...but whatever I may say is just my thoughts at the time. lol
Date: 1/29/2014 2:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Agnes- I choose your first beautiful written poem - hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2014 3:11:00 AM
Good morning Anne-Lise...thank you for the comment. Seems I found a warm place to write. And so look forward to reading and connecting with others here. Have a wonderful Day...
Date: 1/29/2014 1:40:00 AM
hello, Agnes Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2014 3:14:00 AM
Good morning Skat. What a nice welcome. I've been writing for awhile. But being a writer as well you probably know how it goes..when those thoughts hit we write it down. lol. Have a wonderful day, hugs
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