Walk In the Park

WALK IN THE PARK

a lovely late afternoon
sun and shade at eighty
perfect degrees

my toes curl up inside
my sneakers, not
in shape for this season
of walking

surprised to see
a baby bump
bopping along
with expectant runner

i walk steadily toward the wooden bridge,
cross over the creek,
take a little dirt path,
loop back

as i cross the green grass
a huge American crow, leaves
his perch
with a snack

as long as it’s not me
i’m okay
a little too close for comfort

‘he’s the alpha...he’s the alpha!’
i have no illusions, i
tread lightly
not meeting his eyes

keeping mine on the trail
and my trek continues
without peril

i round the path
where a lady sits
with her two huskies
under a tree

i say hello to several walkers
the general
“nice weather we’re having”

one lady keeps to herself
to her cell i should say
but that’s the prerogative
of the introvert
and shy

we have gone around a couple times
passing face to face
so i finally have to ask
the pregnant lady
and she pauses
perhaps
prepared with an answer

“so i just have to ask, how far
along are you?”

she tells me 39 weeks
says it’s any day

i give a warm blessing
and i head for the car

thanking God
for this early Autumn day
spent with strangers
in the park

9/25/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/8/2018 11:54:00 PM
I love walking in the park as well, enjoyed it Kim, Great job.
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:31:00 PM
Its always nice to walk in a park. Nice poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thanks, Harshita!
Date: 9/25/2017 9:51:00 PM
I identified with many lines in your poem, Kim. I walk in our local park with my dog as often as I can. Conversations spring up automatically with other dog owners, although my dog gets far more attention than me. Thanks for reading my work. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 11:08:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice! A dog does get more attention...lol! What kind of dog do you have?
Date: 9/25/2017 9:18:00 PM
I love everything about this :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen! xx
Date: 9/25/2017 7:26:00 PM
Sounds like a delightful walk in the park..lovely poem Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 7:35:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! It was and with a poet's eye even more so, for I love and look for all the lovely surprises!
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