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Walk In the Park

WALK IN THE PARK a lovely late afternoon sun and shade at eighty perfect degrees my toes curl up inside my sneakers, not in shape for this season of walking surprised to see a baby bump bopping along with expectant runner i walk steadily toward the wooden bridge, cross over the creek, take a little dirt path, loop back as i cross the green grass a huge American crow, leaves his perch with a snack as long as it’s not me i’m okay a little too close for comfort ‘he’s the alpha...he’s the alpha!’ i have no illusions, i tread lightly not meeting his eyes keeping mine on the trail and my trek continues without peril i round the path where a lady sits with her two huskies under a tree i say hello to several walkers the general “nice weather we’re having” one lady keeps to herself to her cell i should say but that’s the prerogative of the introvert and shy we have gone around a couple times passing face to face so i finally have to ask the pregnant lady and she pauses perhaps prepared with an answer “so i just have to ask, how far along are you?” she tells me 39 weeks says it’s any day i give a warm blessing and i head for the car thanking God for this early Autumn day spent with strangers in the park 9/25/2017

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:54:00 PM
I love walking in the park as well, enjoyed it Kim, Great job.
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:31:00 PM
Its always nice to walk in a park. Nice poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thanks, Harshita!
Date: 9/25/2017 9:51:00 PM
I identified with many lines in your poem, Kim. I walk in our local park with my dog as often as I can. Conversations spring up automatically with other dog owners, although my dog gets far more attention than me. Thanks for reading my work. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 11:08:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice! A dog does get more attention...lol! What kind of dog do you have?
Date: 9/25/2017 9:18:00 PM
I love everything about this :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen! xx
Date: 9/25/2017 7:26:00 PM
Sounds like a delightful walk in the park..lovely poem Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2017 7:35:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! It was and with a poet's eye even more so, for I love and look for all the lovely surprises!

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