Walk In the Park

Ruby winds were breezing about,
Graceful ducks were crossing my path
Slowly, slowly in a purposeful walk
Curious of a cute fawn scurrying along;
There I paused, watching robins dance
Twittering and twitting songs of joy
In harmony with people ambling by.

Up there upon the blue garb of eventide
Sun was sketching a spectrum on arc
As evening was donning sienna brown;
In yellow rose-blooms some stilled awed 
Some stayed glued to pink-lotus pond
Gazing beauty of gracile white swans.

When orange-glow invoked amber vibes
I lingered at your gazebo a millionth time
Charmed by echoes of sensuous revelry
In whispers of hints from coral peonies
Lilting in your garden of flaming red lilies
Pulsing your heart’s passionate greetings
As fervor of the night chased our dreams.

Whispering to me, “meet me tomorrow”
You divulged to stars how sweet love was
Crooning its praises quite a long time ago--
Before we met for tea on your porch,
Strolls in the park, rise of purple dawns,
Before you waltzed desires of romance,
Before you owned the beats of my heart.

June 14, 2020
Placed 2nd: N/A Rerun-9- by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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George Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Ambling through the park seeing myriad scenes of birds twittering, roses in bloom, fawn scurrying, the evening sun sketching multi colored designs in the sienna sky with your love divulging to the stars how sweet love is....what a heavenly experience have shared with the readers...
Crabtree Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 4:58 PM
Sounds like it was lovely walk :)
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:33 PM
I hadn't realized this one had received an N/A. I'd really loved it when I read it first. I still read it from my fave list. At last back to congratulate you on a win for this one Vijay. :)
Carber Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Nice, Vijay--love the final couplet! Congrats
Hamilton Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 1:37 PM
This is a classic write Vijay, still can't believe this got an N/A, for exactly this reason I do these contests, this is an obvious winner!
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:57 PM
This is so soft and intimate. Such a beautiful misty dreamy piece filled with romance. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 10:11 PM
"Before you owned the beats of my heart" This thought alone is a poem. Oh my!!! So beautiful and romantic, these words from your pen. Such vivid images you paint. I am in complete awe. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks--much appreciate, Brandy.
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Your romantic verses are really magical and blended with musical emotions that contain both agony and hope. I love the soothing words you write. This is another fave for me. :)
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Aditi--so very kind of you to FAVE the poem. Much appreciate your valued feedback.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 8:43 PM
Wow, Vijay! Beautiful imagery, beautiful story, beautiful everything...I enjoyed every word. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Rhonda--much appreciate.
Kannan Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Stunning poetry, Vijay.Your choice of words are brilliant... . I enjoyed it thoroughly...
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Much appreciate Supraja--many thanks for your kind remarks.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 5:10 AM
A masterpiece of poetic romantic canvas , my friend Vijay! You are a master of stunning imagery. Blessings
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:28 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Such a lovely, delightful blend of literal and figurative descriptions, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Cunningham Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Another well written verse Vijay, you are the master of romance, Good Luck. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:46 PM
So very kind of you Tom. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:50 AM
"Sun was sketching a spectrum on arc", and you are sketching a rainbow of impressive imagery on your wonderful work! Your Walk in The Park is both a stroll through the alluring beauty of Nature and a treasure offered to the reader to revel in a so beautiful and harmonious poetry.. Always a great delight to read you ink of beauty, dear Vijay.. the best of luck in the contest. Best regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:45 PM
A great delight for me to read your comments, Besma. Much appreciate--many thanks. Regards.
Michael Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Lots of beautiful imagery grace your write..Well done
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Brul Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Superb imagery! You excellently give the pleasure of reading. Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:44 PM
So very nice of you to say so--much appreciate your comments, JCB--many thanks.
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:58 AM
What an excellent poem Vijay. So beautiful and I loved the ending :)
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:43 PM
So very kind of you, Heidi--much appreciate your comments--many thanks.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Beautiful poem. I so enjoyed it and love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Much appreciate Gina your visit and comments--many thanks.
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