Walk Alone

I take a first step after you  go.
Then find it hard to move alone.
I walk in every memories where you belong.
But couldn't see the shadow of your soul.
Inside the train or in a bus.
I wish you're sitting beside me.
But in a glimpse, you lost like a wind.
I was left alone suspending my tears.
Thinking of the days we laugh together.
While exchanging kisses 'til we partways.
But those were just  part of a dream.
That I still hold until then.
I hope one day, our crossroads will meet.
To hold you once again,
To feel you breathe.
To kiss your nose down to your lips.
To keep you warmth in my embrace.
To burn my soul with your caress.
Today, I'll take the steps all alone.
Holding the hand of your ghost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/23/2014 8:47:00 AM
A deeply felt poem, Aiyah. Moments are treasure to reconnect for a while, slowly one must admit to move on. I deeply appreciate your comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Noel!! :O))
Date: 4/21/2014 8:39:00 PM
When someone we love laves, it is never the same again. Life has a different view. 4We can only see them in our dreams. Great poem, thanks for sharing... Lucila
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/22/2014 10:43:00 AM
Hi Lucilla..I'm glad that you've found my treasure, Dear!! ..Thank you so much... !! :O))
Date: 4/19/2014 10:56:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful yet devastating. Out of pain comes masterpieces and I hope you're alright. Very astig.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 8:27:00 AM
Hi Jake... What a day! ,,, I'm so happy to see my own kababayan commenting on my piece... Maraming salamat!!! :O))
Date: 4/19/2014 11:57:00 AM
Easter is a promise of joy and renewal May this one before us Marks a new beginning Of happiness, love and prosperity. Wishing you all a Happy Easter! With love Maxima
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 8:32:00 AM
Hi Stefan... (sorry for the late reply.. ) Thank you for commenting on my poem.. You are much appreciated!!! ..and my honor to have you on my page.. :O) Have a nice day!!
Date: 4/19/2014 2:06:00 AM
Such a tender yearning, a steadfast sorrow in hope of a ghost becoming a solid sense on your cheek. This is a very beautiful poem, a fine hope. I wish the crossroads meet too. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 8:35:00 AM
Hey JAB.. great words here ,man! .. thank you for this wonderful message on my poem!! :O))
Date: 4/18/2014 8:58:00 PM
You are only alone in body..We will be your crutch when needed...hugs Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/21/2014 8:43:00 AM
Hey Tim... a 'cyber hug" .. that really warmth my soul.. Thanks for the love I always receive from ya' all!!! .. :O))
Date: 4/18/2014 11:57:00 AM
You will never walk alone....if only with memories and dreams. // enjoyed this read. // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/18/2014 12:21:00 PM
I know! ..ha ha.. Thank you Paul!!! All these time I feel I'm alone... Until I found a large group of people who've been so kind to me.. and you're one of the crowd! .. :O))
Date: 4/18/2014 11:31:00 AM
- Some steps we must go alone ...... but I'll always be your shadow - (ghosts are not dangerous ... :) - A very well written poem my dear friend, Aiyah. - Enjoy the holidays and have a happy Easter :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:34:00 AM
Yes Anne... Thank you for being my companion... I'll be home on Easter... :O) I wish you more happiness ,too!! :O) Thanks for the love!! ^__^
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