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Walk

I will walk at eleven.
Easy trip, short, sweet ramble
Down to the creek, midheaven
Is close, just a short amble.

Where the sparse, sweet trillium
Grows, also lofty goshawk
Whose flights are like idioms.
Join me, love, where I will walk!
    

Written: 05/14/2023
Ae Freislighe poetry form

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Valsa George Date: 7/3/2023 1:13:00 AM During our rambles, we get the chance to observe nature and enjoy many beautiful scenes. Nice that you are staying close to a creek. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 7/3/2023 6:49:00 AM Long ago, we the rambles done, Valsa. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/17/2023 6:37:00 PM I like the 'classic feel' of this poem. Lovely penning! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/18/2023 3:20:00 AM Gershon, Thank you for your nice review of my work. I see a mistake already when I reread it, but alas those mistakes are so hard to correct in this syllable sensitive lines. Sara

Christopher Flaherty Date: 5/17/2023 3:30:00 PM Evening Sara Just read this once again a couple of times over And may I say i thought it's actually fantastic and I am going to save it and face it It's a really great simple poem about nature I also just wrote a poem called Welcome to Eden If you get a chance please will you read it and let me know what you think Cheer's Hugs light and blessings Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/18/2023 3:12:00 AM Yes, sometimes we have to read a poem several times to understand what the poet is saying or trying to do with words within the limits of a form. I am pleased that you took the time to do that. I appreciate you saving it and taking time to think about it. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 5/15/2023 1:19:00 PM This a great form, and I need to give it a try. You wrote a fantastic poem, Sara. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2023 1:49:00 PM Do try it, Lasaad. I think you would enjoy the challenge. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/15/2023 2:43:00 AM - Beautiful poem, Sara - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2023 6:26:00 AM Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. I like the smiley face this morning. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/14/2023 11:24:00 PM You manipulate your imagery perfectly Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2023 2:19:00 AM Why, thank you, Victor. 'Twas not easy. Sara

Beryl Edmonds Date: 5/14/2023 8:21:00 PM A lovey Mother’s Day you’ve had Sara, a nice walk with your love and a meal with your daughter, wonderful… Belle Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2023 2:16:00 AM Belle, I am no longer able to do the walk. Only memories remain but I did enjoy part of the day with my daughter. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/14/2023 8:06:00 PM Very sweet imagery Sara, sounds like a wonderful walk with your love! Happy Mother's Day to you! <3 Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2023 2:10:00 AM Thank you, BJ. It was a nice Mother's Day. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 5/14/2023 12:12:00 PM Nicely penned poem with great thoughts and wonderful imagery. Happy Mother's Day dear friend. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/14/2023 3:09:00 PM Thanks for the happy wish. Our daughter so graciously prepared us a meal and we enjoyed it. She is a mother and her daughter-in-law is a mother as well so it was nice for our daughter to give of herself for us to enjoy the day. Sara