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I will walk at eleven. Easy trip, short, sweet ramble Down to the creek, midheaven Is close, just a short amble. Where the sparse, sweet trillium Grows, also lofty goshawk Whose flights are like idioms. Join me, love, where I will walk! Written: 05/14/2023 Ae Freislighe poetry form

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Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2023 1:13:00 AM

During our rambles, we get the chance to observe nature and enjoy many beautiful scenes. Nice that you are staying close to a creek.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/3/2023 6:49:00 AM

Long ago, we the rambles done, Valsa. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2023 6:37:00 PM

I like the 'classic feel' of this poem. Lovely penning! ~ Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/18/2023 3:20:00 AM

Gershon, Thank you for your nice review of my work. I see a mistake already when I reread it, but alas those mistakes are so hard to correct in this syllable sensitive lines. Sara

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/17/2023 3:30:00 PM

Evening Sara Just read this once again a couple of times over And may I say i thought it's actually fantastic and I am going to save it and face it It's a really great simple poem about nature I also just wrote a poem called Welcome to Eden If you get a chance please will you read it and let me know what you think Cheer's Hugs light and blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/18/2023 3:12:00 AM

Yes, sometimes we have to read a poem several times to understand what the poet is saying or trying to do with words within the limits of a form. I am pleased that you took the time to do that. I appreciate you saving it and taking time to think about it. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/15/2023 1:19:00 PM

This a great form, and I need to give it a try. You wrote a fantastic poem, Sara. Thanks for sharing

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 1:49:00 PM

Do try it, Lasaad. I think you would enjoy the challenge. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2023 2:43:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Sara - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 6:26:00 AM

Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. I like the smiley face this morning. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2023 11:24:00 PM

You manipulate your imagery perfectly

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 2:19:00 AM

Why, thank you, Victor. 'Twas not easy. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/14/2023 8:21:00 PM

A lovey Mother’s Day you’ve had Sara, a nice walk with your love and a meal with your daughter, wonderful… Belle

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 2:16:00 AM

Belle, I am no longer able to do the walk. Only memories remain but I did enjoy part of the day with my daughter. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/14/2023 8:06:00 PM

Very sweet imagery Sara, sounds like a wonderful walk with your love! Happy Mother's Day to you! <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 2:10:00 AM

Thank you, BJ. It was a nice Mother's Day. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2023 12:12:00 PM

Nicely penned poem with great thoughts and wonderful imagery. Happy Mother's Day dear friend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/14/2023 3:09:00 PM

Thanks for the happy wish. Our daughter so graciously prepared us a meal and we enjoyed it. She is a mother and her daughter-in-law is a mother as well so it was nice for our daughter to give of herself for us to enjoy the day. Sara