Kim Van Breda Poet Free verse

Waliking On My Cloud

Walking on My Cloud

celebrating victorious 
high-flown elevated verse

of desperate desolation
voyages grand black anger

of calming spiritual
passages reflecting light

then…

surprising realization
a personal revelation

the house is the same
as you have lived in
all these 
years






© Kim van Breda—19 October 2014

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Maurice Yvonne October 26, 2014 at 4:41 AM Excellent! My favorite style of write. Free Verse at its best, regardless of its form this poem sings.

Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 6:28 PM this kim drew so very beautifully for me excellent pen dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2014 at 7:10 AM - So nice to see you Kim! - I see that you post several new poems this past week ....- This is really lovely written - enjoy reading ..... but, I will read some more .... - // Anne-Lise: )