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Waliking On My Cloud

Walking on My Cloud celebrating victorious high-flown elevated verse of desperate desolation voyages grand black anger of calming spiritual passages reflecting light then… surprising realization a personal revelation the house is the same as you have lived in all these years © Kim van Breda—19 October 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/26/2014 4:41:00 AM
Excellent! My favorite style of write. Free Verse at its best, regardless of its form this poem sings.
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:28:00 PM
this kim drew so very beautifully for me excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 10/24/2014 7:10:00 AM
- So nice to see you Kim! - I see that you post several new poems this past week ....- This is really lovely written - enjoy reading ..... but, I will read some more .... - // Anne-Lise: )
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