Doris Culverhouse Poet Rhyme

Waking Up With a Goose and Dandelion Dust

My sight is blurry and in a hurry
Where is my underwear?
Have a pain in my drain, don't need to strain
Do I hear wind and rain?
My mouth feels like dandelion dust
Rinsing goose feathers or bust
Should I trust the starburst
Or just sit and curse or maybe worse?    

Contest: Boisterous comedy for John Freeman
Picture of a man with the morning blues, wild nonfocusing eyes, and dandelion, goose down or starburst in his hair!!

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Sunflower Poetess August 22, 2011 at 7:36 PM congrats on your first place win with this bosterous write. Glenna

Dr.Ram Mehta August 22, 2011 at 3:43 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Doris

Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2011 at 3:35 PM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Doris. Love, Carol

Tony Lane August 22, 2011 at 10:11 AM Well written and a lot of fun. Tony

Nette Onclaud August 22, 2011 at 1:07 AM . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!

Joyce Johnson August 22, 2011 at 12:22 AM Great piece about the picture. congratulations o your big win. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne August 21, 2011 at 9:39 PM funny one Doris! Congratulations to you on a fine win In John's contest! your name looks good in the lights

Mike Dailey August 21, 2011 at 4:23 PM Good poem following a great title. congratulations on the win, Mike

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 4:16 PM Congrats Doris on your first place win with this fabulous funny write my friend.. we are on vacation in Florida with grand babies for two weeks luv..

David Williams August 21, 2011 at 4:10 PM Doris, well done, congrats and just love the title, David

John Freeman August 21, 2011 at 3:48 PM So pleased to see that this was your poem Doris, Beautiful job, congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses

Nancy Jones August 21, 2011 at 1:59 PM whoa... boisterous indeed! Way to go, Doris!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 17, 2011 at 2:11 PM super humor Doris ..luv the breath being like dandelion dust.. awesome.. great entry for the contest ..good luck luv.. guess I should have title it fountain of youth then? sounds like a place I want to find..haha..

James Peranteau August 16, 2011 at 6:54 PM A fine Limerick this would have been ! *smiles* Awesome delight dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Doris....much love, james

Joe Maverick August 16, 2011 at 4:32 PM Wow, i've never been that Blue Doris, you have sure been inventive with this..

James Foulk August 16, 2011 at 10:36 AM this one brought a smile, so creative. thank you for commenting on summer twilight.

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2011 at 12:12 AM I like that you focused on the picture, which was so challenging to me I just did my own joke on something totally different. I hope it scores ya high! LUv, Andrea

John Smith August 15, 2011 at 11:06 PM Too funny. I identify with this man.