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Wake Up, My Heart

Wake up, my heart, walk out the door, Beauty is waiting there, You need be lachrymose no more, Look out and lose your care. Wake up, my heart, let's sit and talk, Don't be morose and frown, We'll discuss poems round the clock, And maybe pen some down. Wake up, my heart, there's lot to do, We've little time for sleep, Wake up now, later we can't rue, Come, let's take that faith leap. 10/21/17

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Date: 11/19/2017 9:09:00 AM
Your poem is perfectly fabulous just the way it is, Jo.
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Date: 11/18/2017 10:22:00 AM
See! This poems is close to perfect meter. What you've written here is known as hymn meter (close to tetra 4 - and tri 3) --The meter has nothing to do with syllables and everything to do with metric feet. Here you have done iambic tetrameter mixed with iambic trimeter 4,3,4,3, etc--pretty close.
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:38:00 AM
YOU MY FRIEND, HAVE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND KIN HEART... A pleasure to read this gem this fine morn..
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Date: 10/25/2017 4:44:00 AM
Nicely done... congratulations...
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Date: 10/22/2017 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Jose, we'll deserved
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Date: 10/22/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:42:00 AM
So beautiful and uplifting, congrats on your win Jo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:35:00 AM
Congrats for your WIN Jo, with this wonderful piece! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 6:46:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/21/2017 10:05:00 AM
Its all about enthuisams and energy... Hope the heart wakes..
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