Wake Up My Heart

In the winter of my mind
my heart remains frozen,
memories sweet still unwind
love long forgotten.

Oh, how I remember
such romantic sunsets,
when we held the moon
in enchanting embrace!

Something did sway 
as love soon blossomed,
and left my ambiance
recklessly abandoned.

Flowers in my heart
will curl up and die,
if not awakened soon
by a vibrant butterfly.

Don't come knocking
if you don't wish to stay,
don't hurt my feelings,
mean what you say.

Bring back the persona
that once gleamed,
burning fire in your flame
that has since dimmed.

I see your silhouette
longing for passion,
I'll open the door
if I see true compassion.

Arrive at the sundown
to whisper in my air,
like the nocturnal moth
circles the moonflower.

You'll need to reignite
visions that fell apart,
to thaw frozen feelings
and wake up my heart.

Placed 3rd
October, 17, 2017
Wake Up My Heart
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/14/2022 9:20:00 AM
Love gone dim can blaze up anytime in future. Lovely penning, Vijay ! Your poems on love are very close to real life and they show the natural ebb and flow of love....
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Date: 12/24/2017 5:59:00 AM
I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2017 6:21:00 AM
Many thanks Arturo..I share your sentiments..have a merry Christmas and a happy new year.
Date: 10/27/2017 7:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2017 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Nayda!
Date: 10/27/2017 6:57:00 AM
Lovely images ... Lovely read
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 10/26/2017 11:52:00 AM
Lovely, moving piece, Vijay--CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 10/25/2017 11:53:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your win with this outstanding and beautifully penned poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you BW!
Date: 10/25/2017 11:06:00 AM
Congrats Vijay... This is an excellent poem..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/22/2017 10:24:00 AM
A great entry and a great win Vijay...and see you soon my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:47:00 AM
Thank you WW!
Date: 10/21/2017 6:47:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/21/2017 8:02:00 AM
Love never dies but waits the moment when we are true to ourselves so as to regenerate our being and reach higher grounds of glory! You see my friend, soon the dawn comes!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios!
Date: 10/18/2017 7:41:00 PM
This poem is a gem, Vijay! I really love the rhythm and flow. Your pen speaks from the heart. Shimmering imagery ... very elegantly expressed. Many beautiful phrases throughout, my friend. An instant classic and going in the fave file for sure. Gold star poetry. Love and more love always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 10/18/2017 9:56:00 AM
A nice poem ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 10/18/2017 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem my friend... Have a nice break..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/18/2017 4:44:00 AM
Beautifully penned my friend, I loved the way you have written this free verse, so wondrously rhythmical in every aspect! I believe your poem to be astounding, and I really enjoyed reading this splendid piece this morning! You have capture love in all it's forms, frozen to expressively wanton! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Russell!
Date: 10/18/2017 3:38:00 AM
so touched by this expressive poem, vijay... the last line was empowering!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you nette!
Date: 10/18/2017 12:08:00 AM
What a lovely poem Vijay, it certainly fits the theme selected. Good luck in the contest, and its a fave with me...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 10/17/2017 6:04:00 PM
You did a fantastic job with the theme, Vijay. So romantic!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2017 6:14:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea!
Date: 10/17/2017 5:52:00 PM
A lovely poem Vijay of a rebuffed love's reverie. Good luck in the contest and looking forward to seeing you back week after next! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Susan.. appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/17/2017 5:42:00 PM
Though this could endure betterment, the poem is not bad from the point of poetic expression and poetic lines. I enjoyed the middle part best. Keep it up! Luis Estable
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/17/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Luis!
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