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WAKE UP!!!!

In the echoes of the night the one lonesome sound of a train not knowing where it’s bound It rolls on past the towns the rivers and the bends around corners unseen As danger lays in wait anticipating contemplating its next move along the cold steel rails that’s bound for heaven or bound for hell only time will tell The warning signs are there the whistle is sounding “ DANGER DANGER” but it keeps on rolling this steam locomotive WAKE UP WAKE UP one lone voice calls out in the night your headed for DANGER but it keeps on rolling this steam locomotive On down the rails it rolls when once again the whistle is sounding ‘DANGER DANGER ‘ as the one lone voice calls out in the night WAKE UP WAKE UP your headed for DANGER Now is the last chance who is it at the helm check with your conductor Is it Satan headed for Hell Or Jesus Headed for Heaven

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Date: 8/9/2025 12:01:00 AM
Hey Eddie, I really felt the urgency in your poem — that train rolling nonstop, the warning cries, it all comes through loud and clear. I like how you keep the tension building and make it feel like a wake-up call we all need sometimes. Strong and straightforward, great job!
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Eddie Driggers
Date: 8/10/2025 2:03:00 PM
Thank so much I appreciate the comment and so happy you enjoyed it
Date: 7/25/2025 10:27:00 AM
Wow! Enjoyed very well
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Eddie Driggers
Date: 7/25/2025 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much it’s appreciated

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