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Waiting, Waiting

Surrounded by myriad friends at his leave-taking surrendering his soul, to Whom and waiting, waiting for what... They clasped hands, freely hugged nodded knowingly While he waited, waited, for what ... alone, insufferably alone

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Date: 1/9/2024 4:08:00 PM
Hello Gershon, there are many people waiting for what I do not know. On ly they know. Enjoy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/10/2024 10:40:00 AM
Hello Gershon, I guess the waiting is worth it. Then we will appreciate it. Pleasantness & Pleasantness /Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2024 7:13:00 PM
When 'the time' comes, I hope neither of us has 'a long wait, Darlene. Pleasantness and Peacefulness, Gershon
Date: 1/8/2024 4:36:00 AM
although short, this is a profound poem. Perhaps this is a poem about Jesus' surrendering his soul and his suffering...or just an ordinary guy dealing with the anguish of being alone despite the appearances. Either way, well done. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:19:00 AM
This one could have double meaning! I like that.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2024 7:17:00 PM
Double meaning? Really?! Now I know why I'm always crossing my eyes...

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