Waiting, Waiting

  Surrounded by myriad friends
    at his leave-taking 
  surrendering his soul, to Whom
    and waiting,
               waiting for what...

  They clasped hands, freely hugged
    nodded knowingly
  While he waited, waited, for what ... 
    alone, insufferably alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Hello Gershon, there are many people waiting for what I do not know. On ly they know. Enjoy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Hello Gershon, I guess the waiting is worth it. Then we will appreciate it. Pleasantness & Pleasantness /Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:13 PM
When 'the time' comes, I hope neither of us has 'a long wait, Darlene. Pleasantness and Peacefulness, Gershon
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:19 AM
This one could have double meaning! I like that.
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 7:17 PM
Double meaning? Really?! Now I know why I'm always crossing my eyes...
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