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Waiting On the Sun

You can almost hear the funeral procession of leaves drifting lowly to earth, symphonic children’s laughter bounces off crispy tips rain completing its wash; lost wet clothes saturated with a day that will enter history. Softness of winter foretelling a story the one washed down storm drains wrapped in black tied laundry bags, suitable for the shedding skin of trees. Swirling wind tosses the pile of dry bones nature, a chef mixing a salad water the dressing-- children the tongs; lunging through piles as if waltzing without mirrors. Time, a rake with bony fingers scraping delicately across an earthen scalp. Longing for new birth, sprout your wings lullaby the past. Lost within reason singing without words wrapping around the rusty rake propped lazily across a skeleton fence. If we face the east, can the west capture thoughts a limp wristed boomerang never returning expectations?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/13/2010 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured peotry. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:25:00 AM
Your imagery in this piece is wonderful! Well done on this deserved piece being featured this week, keep penning, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:43:00 PM
Jason Johnson, Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:30:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:11:00 PM
Creative use of imagery! Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/6/2009 12:31:00 PM
wow. just wow.
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Date: 1/4/2009 1:39:00 PM
great poetry to reflect. I like how it makes me see it as i read it and then i surely have a different view of the poetry.
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