Waiting On the Sun

You can almost hear the funeral procession
of leaves drifting lowly to earth, symphonic 
children’s laughter bounces off crispy tips
rain completing its wash; lost
wet clothes saturated with a day
that will enter history.

Softness of winter foretelling a story
the one washed down storm drains
wrapped in black tied laundry bags,
suitable for the shedding skin of trees.

Swirling wind tosses the pile of dry bones
nature, a chef mixing a salad
water the dressing-- children the tongs;
lunging through piles as if waltzing
without mirrors.

Time, a rake with bony fingers
scraping delicately across 
an earthen scalp. Longing 
for new birth, sprout your wings 
lullaby the past.

Lost within reason 
singing without words
wrapping around
the rusty rake
propped lazily
across a skeleton fence.

If we face the east, can the west capture thoughts
a limp wristed boomerang never returning expectations?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/13/2010 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured peotry. Enjoy the honor. Ernilando
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:25:00 AM
Your imagery in this piece is wonderful! Well done on this deserved piece being featured this week, keep penning, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:43:00 PM
Jason Johnson, Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:30:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:11:00 PM
Creative use of imagery! Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/6/2009 12:31:00 PM
wow. just wow.
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Date: 1/4/2009 1:39:00 PM
great poetry to reflect. I like how it makes me see it as i read it and then i surely have a different view of the poetry.
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