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Waiting on Sunrise

at the distant shore a bathing blue heron~ my cork vanishes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 1:18:00 PM
The bottle opens to allow you an image of this beautiful bird, Patricia. Surely, this site would open any tender heart. Beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2009 10:07:00 AM
Nice Haiku...Enjoyed reading...Marty
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