Waiting In The Wings

Sunlight scampers between, the twigs of naked trees. And a web of shadows, dance with each feisty breeze. A silver sky shimmers, like cheap carnival glass. And yet, this fickle Sun's too weak for blades of grass. Snow accumulates on branches that bend and break. And bow low to the ground with the weight of each flake. Sugar maple sap stalls, not even one sweet drip. And snowmen aren't melting, frozen in Winter's grip. Spring's not on stage quite yet, She's waiting in the wings. And I can almost smell the wildflowers She brings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 2/25/2015 5:43:00 PM
Excellent...excellent! I love this one.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 12:22:00 PM
Another awesome write here, Emile. Did you enter this in the contest? A 7. PS. I see that there was some system glitch awhile ago. I was sure I was commenting on this one. The contest would be SPRING FORWARD. You may want to check it out and make the necessary steps. Kim :D
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Date: 2/25/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Kim, yes the system is on the frits comments are disappearing all over. Thanks for your time and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 12:01:00 PM
Simply sublime imagery - a 7 from me ... and I can't wait for Spring to truly arrive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, neither can I. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 9:44:00 AM
Emile, you have painted a beautiful poem with your words and I can relate to this so much, while I wait here in Canada in the frigid white snow, burrrrr, oh I am weay of winter no matter how lovely it can look at times and thanks for visiting beyond the curtains . . .
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Date: 2/25/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thank you very much for your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Emile! You image exactly what I see and feel here where I live! Your words echo the somber feelings we all must have of this year's exceptionally bitter Winter, and yet how we hold hope for "Spring...waiting in the wing." 7+Fav. Sandra
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Date: 2/25/2015 11:34:00 AM
Sandra, you always bring a smile to my day as I bask in the after glow of your praise, thanks. Emile.
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