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Waiting For You, the Return of the Light

Written for the Winter Solstice sunrise at Avebury, Wiltshire, England I have waited for you Where no shadow seeps Deep in the earth Where the slow damp creeps Under the stones Where the sunlight sleeps I have waited for you I have listened for you In the eaglet’s cry In the echoes of rooks In the empty sky In a new born’s breath And a dead man’s sigh I have listened for you I have looked for you Where the elders grow Followed your steps Through the virgin snow Through groves of yew And mistletoe Looking for you I have watched for you By the door and the gate Risen up early And lain down late Doubted your love And cursed my fate Watching for you You said you would come You said that you will Appear as the dawn On the curve of the hill I have waited for you Through the dark, and the still You said you would come I lit you a fire I kindled a flame In the fear of the darkness I called out your name I thought I was dying And then you came You said you would come And here you are The promise of light Sweetening silence And softening night And all shall be well And be blesséd delight You said you would come © Gail Foster 21st December 2016

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Date: 7/3/2018 2:42:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your "Avebury" poems. They are well crafted in a written form which is easily understandable, and I do like poems to rhyme !
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Gail Foster
Date: 7/4/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Mike. I've written for the equinox and solstice Gorsedds at Avebury for three years now. It's interesting writing about the seasons in different ways each year. All the best.
Date: 1/13/2017 1:05:00 AM
MASTERCLASS!!!. I am your new follower. This is absolutely superb. Now I am compelled to read your other work.#7
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Gail Foster
Date: 7/4/2018 7:14:00 AM
I'm sorry I didn't acknowledge this comment at the time, Jannie, I hope all is well with you.
Date: 1/8/2017 5:43:00 PM
That this superb poem has not received thee accolades and attention it deserves is an absolute disgrace - Shame on you, "Soupers"! One of the best poems I have ever had the good fortune to encounter on this site - Very well done, Gail! All the very best for your New Year...May it be a contented and fulfilling one. :) john
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Gail Foster
Date: 7/4/2018 7:13:00 AM
I'm mortified that it has taken me over a year to reply to this comment. Thank you so very much, John.
Date: 1/2/2017 5:09:00 PM
Magnificent verses and a pleasure to read. Reminds me of my English/Irish/Nordic roots.. A7
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Gail Foster
Date: 7/4/2018 7:12:00 AM
Somehow I missed the comments on this poem at the time, I'm sorry. All the best to you, Robert.
Date: 12/25/2016 2:42:00 PM
Thank you from a fellow Druid. A lovely poem. It's a rare pleasure to read good rhyming and strongly metrical poems these days.
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Gail Foster
Date: 12/29/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jim. Reading this poem at sunrise in the circle was a moving experience. I have an affinity with Avebury, and the Druids. Many blessings to you.
Date: 12/21/2016 4:43:00 PM
Lovely, Gail. A 7 and fave. I wish you a blessed solstice. Agnes
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Gail Foster
Date: 12/29/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes, all good things to you :)

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