Waiting For the Whales Yupik 8 Lines For Contest

WAITING FOR THE WHALES
                                        with the Yupik

          On icy shores the Yupik women grab their down-wrapped kids--
          Muscled men push-slide long boats from old white plastic skids.
          Squinting grey horizons -- snow-fog blurs keenest sight--
          Wondering which hunter fickle gods will take tonight.
          Seal skin gear repels the wet while ice finds nervous hands,
          Hunters --cheerful-- brave the cold that rules in Arctic lands.
          Suddenly a burst of water spits above their heads--
          Spears flash—too late—whale disappears--but not a soul is dead.



Note:
Yupik people are one of the Native American tribes 
of Eskimos in Northern Alaska whose traditional life included whale, polar bear and seal hunting.
The U.S. government allows them to hunt one whale per season to fulfill their religious
and cultural tradition.  This hunt was near Barrow, Alaska spring 2012.

Victoria Anderson-Throop ©
Jan 11 2013
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A  Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 5:49 PM
good couplets I like what I read, ~SKAT
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Victoria, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD
Gorelick Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Our thoughts along the same lines. Congrats to you and your wonderful write. BG
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:57 PM
I would love to hear more of this culture too! I love the inuit art. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Anderson-Throop Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 2:38 PM
maybe i will write more...hadn't thought about writing of it until the challenge of the contest!
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:08 AM
Victoria congrats on your win, love this..David
Collins Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Dear Victoria How beautiful those whales and danger-filled the story of the Yupik. Your last two lines artfully spare both hunter and whale. The melodious meter and rhyme are a pleasure to read. love, Kathy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations Victoria xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:46 AM
Well done, congratulations on win.
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Great write Victoria, I imagined the scene.....Seren
Macmillan Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 4:06 PM
This is wonderful, Victoria! I love its voice and your delivery. Good build up of suspense, you really kept me within your lines. If this is for Debbie, I'm fairly certain she will love this! Thanks for sharing this. Glad I stopped by, Smiles from Cyndi
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