Waiting For the Funeral

How many times had she celebrated
longed for his coming death
sat imagining her great freedom
the wealth she so richly deserved

No more of his groping
hungering for her essence
she had satisfied him many times
treated him to all her portals
pleasured him to the altar

He denied her nothing
her aspirations went higher than her skirt
how long would this sentence last
certainly longer than their conversations
he was fluent in the art of need

she had thought of killing him
yet she lacked the will
hoping he might take one too many blue pills
So she could ride him to her dreams
suffocate him with one final kiss


her appetite for love unrestrained 
she desired her pleasure mixed with pain
he couldn't hurt her in the ways that mattered
she found her release in the arms of another
not all things done in the dark remain secret


A young woman died today
a terrible accident we're told
his assistant is there to comfort him
they'll be engaged in just a few short weeks
after all, the man has his needs


For the "Poet III poetry contest."
By Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 9:17 PM
You have me laughing, a work in progress indeed! Fantastic, You should show both versions!!! Loved this, just goes to show there is a reward for reading poems more than once!!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Sorry I missed this comment arthur. A belated thanks.
Jones Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Wow..where did this come from? Haha...this one woke me up tonight Richard...:-) :-) :-) awesome
Anish Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Reminded me of the Great Gatsby. Thank you for your support. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:57 PM
My pleasure Matthew.
Walker  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:21 PM
This story is thought capturing Rick. You wove the patterns expertly. I enjoyed this reading. Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 1:42 PM
;0) thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed my story.
Pettit Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 11:13 PM
A very imaginative write that could inspire a good movie or television show.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Wow, GREAT twist. and here I was rooting for the dame. hahaha. This put me in mind of the ID shows I love to watch so much. Do you watch those shows? this kind of stuff is always happening. True stories and stranger than fiction. Loved this.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Sad but true, each is a predator of sorts.
Kos Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 12:04 PM
You, Sir, come up with truly unique & original poems AND titles. A most admirable piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Ivo.
Sirak Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Wonderful twist at the end. Evil thoughts breed evil deeds.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Hi Monterey, it's always nice to have you visit.
Palmer Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:15 PM
enjoy every line,love the twist,from the wife situation to the husband victory lol,great Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 2:59 PM
A certain poetic justice. Thanks for commenting Richard.
Toil Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Hi Rick. Yes indeed, you have sketched well two predators of selfish need. I love the way you executed this poem from the point of view of the desperate woman. That she was evil. And then you turn the tables in the end. So that we see the evil in the man as well. Well done my friend! Peace...Ben
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Two morally bankrupt souls. I'm pleased you like my little tale.
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 10:25 AM
i am touched by the depth of your soul, rich.. amazing!.. hugggs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Hugs back and a big thanks!
Hamilton Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:00 AM
hi Rick hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Hi back Shadow. Big hug as well.
Bordner Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Amusing irony Richard. Comprehensive morbidity, well expressed. I like how you display her arrogancein the line, " He ccouldn't hurt her in the ways that mattered..."
Lamoureux Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 8:26 AM
I was reffering to her desire for rough sex. Thanks for commenting Justin.
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 12:19 PM
I sometimes wonder at what inspires you. Often I know it is the contest theme, but then, there are poems like this that just leave me wondering....Interesting and captivating write.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Would you like some butter on the next batch?
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Keep that popcorn of ideas popping away! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 3:34 PM
I have no idea, things just pop into my head sometimes.
Deschler Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 9:23 PM
I really liked that twist at the end. I was not expecting that! A very dramatic and dark story that was written and told very well. Great work, Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Thanks Kelly.
Dylan Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Richard wow oh wow amazing writing.. very line is a masterpiece.. very word.. wonderful.. you have a way with words..So she could ride him to her dreams suffocate him with one final kiss... AMAZING... Brooke
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 9:37 AM
You are kind Brooke, Thanks for visiting, you are welcome any time.
Dunn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:42 PM
WOW this is a an interesting write but i know a few women like this it's such a waste of life in a nut shell, in a situation like this their is know winner at all, great poem but it's a sad truth of anytime. cheri
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Thanks Cheri, this was a fun one to write.
Hamilton Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:59 PM
love the twist Rick great pen hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Thanks Shadow, it is good I can surprise you.
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 7:52 AM
A Heartfelt story started ..... Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram
Frankel Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 5:29 AM
great title and really powerful writing!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Alex.
Vaso Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:49 PM
When you say work in progress, shes still trying to kill him? Because this poem my friend is fantastic!! From the title to the end, a great write!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Hi Arthur, I had not thought of it that way but that could work *lol*
Thajudeen Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Very rare.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Muhammad.
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