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I am waiting for Springtime ... to arrive, and all the Spring flowers buds to bloom bright; I pray that my planted flowers will thrive ! Sadly- it snowed and I hope they survive, all they need is many days of sunlight; I am waiting for Springtime ... to arrive ! Have to work hard to keep them all alive, for there are still some chances of frostbite; I pray that my planted flowers will thrive ! Will vigorously go all out- and strive, waiting for that awesome multi hued sight; I am waiting for Springtime ... to arrive ! Into the sweet tulips I want to dive, and the daisies- hyacinths purple and white; I pray that my planted flowers will thrive ! Will let them grow wild- I never contrive, and if they wilt I know how to revive; I am waiting for Springtime . . . to arrive, I pray that my planted flowers will thrive ! ____________________ April 08, 2022 Poetry/Villanelle/Waiting for Springtime Copyright Protected, ID 04-1446-373-08 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Springtime Villanelle sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 05/06/2022 First Place

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Date: 5/9/2022 1:02:00 PM
WoW! Constance, This is lovely and so well written. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/9/2022 3:29:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/9/2022 10:20:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win in Lassad's contest. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/9/2022 3:29:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/6/2022 8:16:00 PM
"Into the sweet tulips I want to dive" - Wow! Great poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/7/2022 6:58:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 5/6/2022 11:44:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on winning first place in my contest. You've written an Amazing, flawless poem. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/6/2022 11:51:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest and my amazing placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/8/2022 9:40:00 AM
Wow, Constance. And...aren't we all??? You know how I love Villanelles, and this one is perfection. Love it!
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:02:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~Constance
Date: 4/8/2022 8:26:00 AM
Constance, a charming write~a tribute to the fickle Springtime that sometimes outsmarts our vision in the garden. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:03:00 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement ~Constance

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