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Waiting For Sailors

waiting for sailors

who battle King Neptune's wrath. . . 

their watery graves


For the Haiku 102 Poetry Contest of Nathan D

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Steve Grammatico

February 19, 2016 at 6:01 AM

"watery graves"--a stellar image, Andrea. Congrats on your placement.

Eve Roper

February 17, 2016 at 1:33 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight

February 17, 2016 at 7:34 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your excellent win for this outstanding Haiku! Hugs, Sandra

Teddy Kimathi

February 17, 2016 at 2:00 AM

Congrats Andrea, for your top placement with this amazing verse!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry

February 17, 2016 at 1:45 AM

Congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 16, 2016 at 10:50 PM

Congrats on ur great win with this awesome haiku Andrea.

Timothy Hicks

February 16, 2016 at 6:57 PM

You paint a frightening picture, Andrea. Congrats on the win.

Sara Kendrick

February 16, 2016 at 5:32 PM

Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats.Excellent Haiku.Sara

Joseph May

February 16, 2016 at 3:46 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea..

Jan Allison

February 16, 2016 at 3:21 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

February 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM

Congrats Andrea :)

Paul Callus

February 16, 2016 at 1:28 PM

Neptune does not take kindly to opposition, Andrea! The thought of those cold watery graves would be enough to give me the shivers! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win! // paul

Barbara Gorelick

February 16, 2016 at 12:51 PM

My favorite...congrats ...BG

Poet Destroyer A

February 16, 2016 at 12:30 PM

Andrea, Congratulations in Nate's "Haiku 102" contest. LINDA

Nathan D.

February 16, 2016 at 11:59 AM

I like it, Andrea. Thanks Nate'

Sandra Adams

February 13, 2016 at 11:54 AM

oh wow...very cool, powerful haiku, i think this one will do well in the contest....hugs

Bl Devnath

February 13, 2016 at 11:45 AM

Excellent haiku. Wish you Good luck and 7. Loved always,bl

Daver Austin

February 13, 2016 at 11:19 AM

DaveyJones would be proud, and I am proud of you for this Haiku. Who said my rhyme is for the birds? Love, daver

Timothy Hicks

February 12, 2016 at 8:31 PM

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James Inman

February 12, 2016 at 7:25 PM

Great Haiku, Andrea.

Jennifer Walker

February 12, 2016 at 6:46 PM

Well done.

Nette Onclaud

February 12, 2016 at 2:45 PM

how visual, andie.. i made one but deleted it as the contest closed... fine 'ku..huggs

Eileen Manassian

February 12, 2016 at 2:38 PM

Good one, Andrea. The force of the sea is powerfully depicted in pic and verse. Good luck....

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 12, 2016 at 1:37 PM

- I have to say the same - Powerful and great, Andrea - It is King Neptune that makes it strong and powerful - third line: respect for sea .... well done - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

February 12, 2016 at 12:55 PM

Very powerful pen Andrea - good luck in the contest I slipped in at no 35:-) hugs Jan xx

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