Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Waiting For Fireworks - Lg

Written March 14th, 2020
Contest: Back When Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier


Resting our legs
some reading books
others enjoying the view

I held onto my guy
one of the readers
women were gossiping to my left

best friend was to my right
surrounded by every kind of car
men-boys were comparing them

fireworks had not yet started 
no biggie to me
I had who I wanted

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Panagiota Romios March 28, 2020 at 6:29 PM Caren, Congratulations and a big hug. You go, you wineer you! Panagiota xxx Caren Krutsinger March 28, 2020 at 9:52 PM Thank you my friend.

Reason A. Poteet March 26, 2020 at 11:04 PM With a birthday on July 3rd, fireworks have always been special to me and I celebrate my birthday in their midst. Great piece as I look back to celebrations such as might have taken place as you describe. Congrats on your placement. Caren Krutsinger March 26, 2020 at 11:26 PM Thank you very much Reason A. Poteet. I appreciate it.