Waiting For Plane Take Off

Dozing before take-off. Patients etherized and unable,
Evening  spread into the distance
Silly solitaire cards spread on pull-down table. 
I  hate toves with  imagined importance
Giving direction to momeraths who do not need  it. 


Through my window   
Ants -  like  small people  from 3000 feet.
Petite  stewardess's candy for pressure-reduction pain. EAT ME

          It’s food that makes my feelings small
          My feeling’s not so big  at all
          I’ve never felt a big and dizzy  love whirl
          But better to have loved a pretty short girl 
          Than never to have loved a  tall
 

One Jubjub  obsessed with  one minute’s lateness there
His last creativity was when he got up off  his potty.  
All in sync. Seat belts. Seats upright. Put cards away, sir.
Feeling dizzy from wine in the waiting lounge. DRINK ME.

           A liquor which can make me grow
           Is  not so very bad you know
           Taller guys make better dancers
           Taller animals better prancers
           Giraffes are fast and lizards slow

I have known toves, and listened, bored, and heard
Their drunken speeches at parties,  wary of the Jubjub bird.

 
Our silver bird’s rolling now.  And we
Switch off cell-phones. No more calls that
Say nothing to no one.  In the ethereal world of electro-chat,
We need items marked  SMOKE ME.

            Horizon seems with puffs to bend
            The sunset seems  to never  end
            The silver wings  can  lift us  all  sky-high
            Where snow and rainfall  disappear with sigh
            As through the clouds of smoke we wend

Caterpillar clouds with  hookahs  on  a mushroom bed.
Be careful:  one minute late  into Stansted -
Queen of Hearts  will  off-with-my-head. 


Through the glass I see  ground  -  those  people in sight
From 3000 feet are in fact ants: for our silver bird is still grounded tight.
A cabin-sign lights up, saying    KICK ME

            Too  long  I tarried in this field of fools
            Where each  one follows some imagined  rules
            Wonderland  characters  are notably oblivious to logic
            Their dramatic,  wordy isolation is patently ridiculous and loquaciously tragic
            The drool of mules fuels the rules of schools.

I  delight to have my  part of the drama  said: 
If you’re too old or inflexible for the job - off with your head.
Kick me for  tolerating it too long and hard.
I have said they’re only silly cards;
But in my game of solitaire void and null
I should have been more forceful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/21/2011 9:03:00 PM
ahhh, yes, I just KNEW this was right up Deb's alley. it was a winner for sure,Sydney. a BIG congrats to you on this well-crafted piece!
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie's "Ask Alice" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:35:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Sydney
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:46:00 AM
spinning me around with great sensory images, syd.. hey, how did you get this from my secret folder?? kidding... sure-fire topper with big congrats :) hhuggs!
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:34:00 PM
This was just amazing....a sure shoo -in winner!!!! I agree with Debbie's choice!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:39:00 PM
Look who's the BIG winner! Congrad's on this fine romp taking the big cheese! Light & Love
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/20/2011 3:22:00 AM
Debs yo u are too kind to me about my scribbles and squiggles....but thank you very much for the placing....I have said this before and say it again now...it takes two people to make a success in poetry competitions..... the one who writes an entry and the one who organises a stimulating competition ...that's you girl ! Well done yourself, Debs
Date: 6/11/2011 8:55:00 AM
WOW like Andrea said this is packed full of meanings. The title grabbed my attention as I had a dream last night of trying to catch a plane. An excellent piece. God Bless Phyl
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/11/2011 9:56:00 PM
Phyl, a comment from you is very much appreciated for I admire your stuff highly, although I rarely write comments to people for I seem to be always busy with work ..... thanks very much for finding interest in my doggerel L O L.....I guess the original ALICE IN WONDERLAND is so packed with meanings that maybe some of it kinda rubs off....let's stay in touch.... best wishes...Syd
Date: 6/8/2011 7:57:00 PM
My gosh, I think this must be so full of deep meaning, I could never find it all. Just like Alice in wonderland! I love the repitition of the ME lines. Kick me was funny. I think you must have worked a long time on this beauty. Debs hopefully appreciates it!
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:17:00 PM
Ohh lovely lovely my owl, my Hi with the sound of both attack and greeting, I see your head spin 360 as your I's greet your tale in wonder, "Just RIGHT, just right," said the toadstool under Steven Hawkings!
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