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Waiting For Plane Take Off

Dozing before take-off. Patients etherized and unable, Evening spread into the distance Silly solitaire cards spread on pull-down table. I hate toves with imagined importance Giving direction to momeraths who do not need it. Through my window Ants - like small people from 3000 feet. Petite stewardess's candy for pressure-reduction pain. EAT ME It’s food that makes my feelings small My feeling’s not so big at all I’ve never felt a big and dizzy love whirl But better to have loved a pretty short girl Than never to have loved a tall One Jubjub obsessed with one minute’s lateness there His last creativity was when he got up off his potty. All in sync. Seat belts. Seats upright. Put cards away, sir. Feeling dizzy from wine in the waiting lounge. DRINK ME. A liquor which can make me grow Is not so very bad you know Taller guys make better dancers Taller animals better prancers Giraffes are fast and lizards slow I have known toves, and listened, bored, and heard Their drunken speeches at parties, wary of the Jubjub bird. Our silver bird’s rolling now. And we Switch off cell-phones. No more calls that Say nothing to no one. In the ethereal world of electro-chat, We need items marked SMOKE ME. Horizon seems with puffs to bend The sunset seems to never end The silver wings can lift us all sky-high Where snow and rainfall disappear with sigh As through the clouds of smoke we wend Caterpillar clouds with hookahs on a mushroom bed. Be careful: one minute late into Stansted - Queen of Hearts will off-with-my-head. Through the glass I see ground - those people in sight From 3000 feet are in fact ants: for our silver bird is still grounded tight. A cabin-sign lights up, saying KICK ME Too long I tarried in this field of fools Where each one follows some imagined rules Wonderland characters are notably oblivious to logic Their dramatic, wordy isolation is patently ridiculous and loquaciously tragic The drool of mules fuels the rules of schools. I delight to have my part of the drama said: If you’re too old or inflexible for the job - off with your head. Kick me for tolerating it too long and hard. I have said they’re only silly cards; But in my game of solitaire void and null I should have been more forceful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/21/2011 9:03:00 PM
ahhh, yes, I just KNEW this was right up Deb's alley. it was a winner for sure,Sydney. a BIG congrats to you on this well-crafted piece!
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie's "Ask Alice" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:35:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Sydney
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:46:00 AM
spinning me around with great sensory images, syd.. hey, how did you get this from my secret folder?? kidding... sure-fire topper with big congrats :) hhuggs!
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:34:00 PM
This was just amazing....a sure shoo -in winner!!!! I agree with Debbie's choice!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:39:00 PM
Look who's the BIG winner! Congrad's on this fine romp taking the big cheese! Light & Love
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/20/2011 3:22:00 AM
Debs yo u are too kind to me about my scribbles and squiggles....but thank you very much for the placing....I have said this before and say it again now...it takes two people to make a success in poetry competitions..... the one who writes an entry and the one who organises a stimulating competition ...that's you girl ! Well done yourself, Debs
Date: 6/11/2011 8:55:00 AM
WOW like Andrea said this is packed full of meanings. The title grabbed my attention as I had a dream last night of trying to catch a plane. An excellent piece. God Bless Phyl
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/11/2011 9:56:00 PM
Phyl, a comment from you is very much appreciated for I admire your stuff highly, although I rarely write comments to people for I seem to be always busy with work ..... thanks very much for finding interest in my doggerel L O L.....I guess the original ALICE IN WONDERLAND is so packed with meanings that maybe some of it kinda rubs off....let's stay in touch.... best wishes...Syd
Date: 6/8/2011 7:57:00 PM
My gosh, I think this must be so full of deep meaning, I could never find it all. Just like Alice in wonderland! I love the repitition of the ME lines. Kick me was funny. I think you must have worked a long time on this beauty. Debs hopefully appreciates it!
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:17:00 PM
Ohh lovely lovely my owl, my Hi with the sound of both attack and greeting, I see your head spin 360 as your I's greet your tale in wonder, "Just RIGHT, just right," said the toadstool under Steven Hawkings!
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