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Waiting

I been tired of waiting and waiting i been melting.
It’s been almost an hour when it started raining
I can’t tell you how much I want a smelting
I need energy since an hour I have been draining.

How upsetting it’s the time
How sad is to wait
How come, i just want to dine
How late! I’m starting to hate

Please I don’t care just cook
Please contact the manager
Please just read a book
Please one that let you know how to cook a tanager.

Hurry! I want to eat!
Hurry! I need to go to a meeting
Hurry! I could even eat wheat
Hurry! I am a fan of meat eating

Copyright © Santiago Leanza | Year Posted 2016

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Santiago Leanza Date: 3/16/2016 10:41:00 AM By the way i just finished a new poem. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/rainy_day_768828 Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/15/2016 5:19:00 PM Santiago, stopping by to see if you had a new poem up SKAT Login to Reply Santiago Leanza Date: 3/16/2016 9:55:00 AM Thank you. I might write a new poem. I honestly don't know

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2016 5:09:00 PM Santiago, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2016 12:26:00 PM - Thank you for your first poem, Santiago :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/14/2016 11:30:00 AM santiago leanza, nice for a first poem and post, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply

Santiago Leanza Date: 3/14/2016 11:11:00 AM This is my first poem. I am currently doing a class project and I thought I would submit it. Login to Reply