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Waiting

I been tired of waiting and waiting i been melting. It’s been almost an hour when it started raining I can’t tell you how much I want a smelting I need energy since an hour I have been draining. How upsetting it’s the time How sad is to wait How come, i just want to dine How late! I’m starting to hate Please I don’t care just cook Please contact the manager Please just read a book Please one that let you know how to cook a tanager. Hurry! I want to eat! Hurry! I need to go to a meeting Hurry! I could even eat wheat Hurry! I am a fan of meat eating

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Santiago Leanza

Date: 3/16/2016 10:41:00 AM

By the way i just finished a new poem. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/rainy_day_768828

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:19:00 PM

Santiago, stopping by to see if you had a new poem up SKAT

Santiago Leanza
Date: 3/16/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you. I might write a new poem. I honestly don't know

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 5:09:00 PM

Santiago, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:26:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Santiago :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:30:00 AM

santiago leanza, nice for a first poem and post, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Santiago Leanza

Date: 3/14/2016 11:11:00 AM

This is my first poem. I am currently doing a class project and I thought I would submit it.