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Waiting

On a day where the rain attacks the windshield only to be brushed away like an ill-timed rebuke, yet caresses my face sweeping back my hair to unveil the intensity of longing caused by you do you think of me? My entire being sings for you- My life resonates in your echoes. I will wait for you... will you ever come to me? I dreamed last night of a kiss- that you leaned down to me and covered my mouth with yours, wholly bound to me as if your tongue wrapped around mine joined us more than in a marriage any lovers are. Do you dream of me? My entire being sings for you- My life resonates in you echoes. I will wait for you... will you ever come to me? When I first said your name it began to grow in me. On my breath I hear the whisper of the words. My heart beats to the rhythm of the syllables immortally impressing themselves on my pulse- in my blood. Do you long for me? My entire being sings for you- My life resonates in you echoes. I will wait for you... will you ever come to me?

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Date: 5/4/2009 5:08:00 PM
dude your poetry is waaywaaywaay better then mine:) it is very beautiful i love it!!! dont stop writing poetry ever!! (:
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:20:00 PM
There is a great sense of longing in this poem, Micaela. I love the way you closed each verse with a question that deserves a response. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:27:00 AM
Every stanza ending with a passionate question... tastefully yet powerfully erotic. You the sensibility of a true poet... I am a big fan, Keith
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Date: 3/10/2009 2:27:00 PM
Heartfelt romantic poetry. You use the repitition of lines to good effect in this ode. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/10/2009 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Fantastic Free Verse contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/8/2009 7:33:00 PM
from the heart. very beautiful
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Date: 3/8/2009 12:28:00 PM
Dear Micaela - This poem is filled with compassion and tenderness. Nicely done! CONGRATS on your WIN in Christie's contest. A terrific write. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/7/2009 2:00:00 PM
Micaela congratulations on placing in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:34:00 PM
Hi Micaela.... lovely poem of longing... beautiful imagery... well deserved win.. congrats !
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:53:00 AM
Yay Micaela! Congratulations on your win in Christie's contest! Nice going!! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:12:00 AM
Such heartfelt poetry...Congratulations on this winning poem!~ Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:11:00 AM
i loved this piece... you heart felt passion.. is beautiful!! and congrats ~ Arany
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Date: 3/2/2009 10:07:00 AM
Love as a harmonic, yes, all life vibrates. My entire being sings for you- My life resonates in youR echoes. I will wait for you... will you ever come to me? Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:25:00 AM
Beautifully written. A passionate longing for love. I loved the whole write. ~Belinda~
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Date: 2/22/2009 6:42:00 AM
I have no doubt he is out there, dreaming of you in the same way. A beautiful write filled with the longing of love. The rainy day atmosphere you began with set the tone of this excellent write. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/19/2009 3:59:00 PM
Micaela...what a passionate work! A guy would be damn lucky to have a devotion like this. Thank you for the compliment on my writing...I'll keep my eye on your poems! = ) Much love, Steve
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:29:00 PM
very nice, sad, hurting love poem. its the truth of love sometimes to pine away for your lover. very nice work
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