Waiter

eye at the center friend to chaos cycles spinning round space time roadhouse corner eatery and saloon two eggs easy over toast and coffee please stan sand

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/14/2019 7:46:00 PM

Hello Sand Blown, I would order bacon and eggs with potatoes and toast. This is what I would order for breakfast. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2019 11:10:00 AM

A breakfast write contest! Why not? Go for it!.... have a nice day my friend.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/14/2019 8:15:00 PM

hi Darlene...ahhh fried potato wedges, salted and peppered just like the bacon and eggs...once in a while myself...what say a 'breakfast write' contest

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/14/2019 3:47:00 PM

That's the way it is when you're waiting tables; chaotic at times but, some folks like the job. Beautifully penned.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/14/2019 3:59:00 PM

waiters and teachers deserve good pay...try selling ideas to the average student when they're not interested, or they've got their electronic distractions...that's one nice thing about university...separates the serious from the knots

Constance La France

Date: 1/14/2019 10:47:00 AM

Stan, oh a delightful read, I could use two eggs over easy and toast at the moment ~

Sand Blown
Date: 1/14/2019 3:45:00 PM

its my favorite road house snack when i drive...it's a reminder of breakfast : ) and an energizer...i'm glad you liked it dear heart...the rhyme started out as something about life changing and waiters often have the eyes : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2019 8:41:00 PM

I enjoyed your take on waiter, Stan! I was a waitress once upon a time and actually enjoyed that job. I love it busy. You get lots of tips and the time flies!

Sand Blown
Date: 1/14/2019 3:29:00 PM

one of my sisters waitressed to get through university... she too enjoyed her work for the reasons you say : ) cheers

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2019 4:01:00 PM

Viewpoint of a waiter, sees all, solves all, (the good ones do, anyway) intriguing!

Sand Blown
Date: 1/14/2019 3:27:00 PM

as caren said...she was also a teacher...i did not wait tables but i've waited long years for things of time and i feel good

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/12/2019 6:22:00 PM

"friend to chaos" - yes, a waiter must have eight pairs of eyes and be on "revolve" at all times. Great job! I suspect you have done this once or twice.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/12/2019 7:49:00 PM

lets just say...having been a teacher i learned a way to word certain perspectives ; )

Sherry Beck

Date: 1/12/2019 5:42:00 PM

This is such a fun read, yes, take a brake from the cycle that spins in the hopes it is just a season! Great write!

Sand Blown
Date: 1/12/2019 7:44:00 PM

thank you...i'll take a break a toast you sherry

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2019 3:59:00 PM

Coming in a jiffy, Sir...and that's because you said please :) Enjoyed! Regards // paul

Sand Blown
Date: 1/12/2019 7:40:00 PM

table service is a benefit of the times : )