Wait No More

With horses revving under the hood,
speed cameras will not treat me good,
and the copper said ‘hey,
for you I waited all day’ ...
well I got there as quick as I could.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/1/2019 1:45:00 PM
In reply to what you told me down here. NOTHING has ever gotten me off from having tickets. Even when I am sweet as can be with the cops!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/6/2019 8:11:00 PM
Hello Andrea … I guess they've been warned about writing so many tickets each day, and if every excuse was believed, not many tickets would be written. Good luck next time Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 5/23/2019 6:35:00 PM
lol! Fabulous Lindsay
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/31/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thank you allen … I wouldn't advise you to try it though - Lindsay
Date: 5/23/2019 3:36:00 AM
They do lay in wait. Loved your ending! I bet they have heard everything under the sun. : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/31/2019 8:36:00 PM
Hello Connie … it must bring tears to their eyes listening to the sob stories - that is before they hand you the ticket - thanks Connie - Lindsay
Date: 5/22/2019 5:15:00 PM
Those coppers seem to be everywhere guess should watch what I say as two brothers are retired coppers. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 7:41:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … without the police, society would be very dangerous, if it isn't bad enough with them around. They must hear some weird excuses - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 5/22/2019 2:49:00 PM
Very Funny my friend and as always, well written and rhymed!....Have a good one!................Pat
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 7:38:00 PM
Thanks again Pat for reading and commenting - Lindsay
Date: 5/21/2019 5:57:00 PM
lindsay, giggling over nasty rides... greeat one!..huggs
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 2:00:00 AM
Hello nette … I hope you never have to use this quote, but it might get you off a speeding charge - thank you nette - Lindsay
Date: 5/21/2019 3:42:00 PM
Great sense of humour Lindsay - a fun poem, a clever write. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:58:00 AM
Hello Jennifer … thanks for your encouraging comment Jennifer. I'll be out to catch up on your work soon - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 11:15:00 PM
Great one Lindsay!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:56:00 AM
G'day Timothy … if you happen to use this Timothy, please don't mention my name - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 8:58:00 PM
G'day Lindsay, LOL I have to remember this one if I ever get pulled over. Cleverly written. ~Charlie
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:54:00 AM
Hello Charles … the end result could go either way Charles. Thank you - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 8:35:00 PM
Very clever, Lindsay! :) gw
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:53:00 AM
G'day Gershon … it just might be worth a try. At least you might get a smile when you're handed the charge sheet - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 8:20:00 PM
Very good. Hey you are one clever poet Panagiota
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:51:00 AM
Nice to meet you Panagioto. Thanks for commenting. I'll catch you again soon - Lindsay
Date: 5/20/2019 9:16:00 AM
Lindsay, good one!. I like the line where the copper said , for you I waited all day... it sure seems that way sometimes !
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:49:00 AM
Hello Dear Heart … I guess when an individual motorist gets pulled up, that's how they feel - thanks Dear Heart - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 6:44:00 PM
cute punch line!
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:47:00 AM
Hello Andrea … should try and use it if you ever get pulled up. It might get you off - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 1:20:00 PM
Big Brother Down Under! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:46:00 AM
Yes Rico … you can't escape the long arm of the law Rico - thanks again - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 8:44:00 AM
Thank you for the laugh, Lindsay:) Haven't seen you around for ages! Regards // paul
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:44:00 AM
Hello there Paul … It's been on and off for me. Time is the enemy. Thank you Paul for reading and commenting - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 2:18:00 AM
made me smile Lindsay, now the warmer weather is here the coppers are out like pesky wasps:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:42:00 AM
Hello Jan … but the sting is worse Jan. Thanks Jan - Lindsay
Date: 5/19/2019 12:35:00 AM
The scurge of the motorist, its a money making racket.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/22/2019 1:41:00 AM
G'day Tom … what isn't these days. Too many parasites now - thanks Tom - Lindsay
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