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Wait For Me

Wait for me in the stillness of the night
Cover your nakedness with a soft sheet
When I come home to you, we will take flight

Together in love our two hearts will meet
Tantalize me by holding passion back
Cover your nakedness with a soft sheet

All of my senses are under attack
My imagination, consuming me
Tantalize me by holding passion back

Within my mind's eye I can clearly see
Ripping off the sheet to reveal your power
My imagination consuming me

The moment will come when we both devour
All off your mysteries will soon be mine
Ripping off the sheet to reveal your power

Together on love's bliss we'll gladly dine
All of your mysteries will soon be mine
Wait for me in the stillness of the night
When I come home to you, we will take flight.

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Eileen Manassian Date: 3/27/2020 1:59:00 AM Wow.... that's... something else! Glad to revisit this one. Hope you're doing well. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/27/2020 7:39:00 AM I forgot I wrote this one. ;0)

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/2/2015 10:11:00 AM Oh? Is that where she is? If you are going to see her, please give her my love. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/2/2015 5:37:00 PM No, we are white water rafting in Washington with our son and his girlfriend and her parents. I just got news the surgery went well and mom is in recovery.

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/2/2015 9:37:00 AM I'm sure that title in itself has moving power, Richard. This was just a little piece of heaven. So beautiful! I'm thinking of you and your Mom today. Please keep me updated. Hugs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/2/2015 9:53:00 AM Thanks Eileen, I will. I will be in the states so it may be a few days. Hugs Rick

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 12/10/2014 1:37:00 PM Dear Master of Terzanelle, I enjoyed the moment,and I meditated especially on the verses:My imagination, consuming me Tantalize me by holding passion back". Actually,we (people) are troubled not so much by things themselves but especially by our feelings following she image we have about them...It is also the REBT .Then,passion moves mountains of troubles.Good passions ... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/10/2014 1:42:00 PM What a wonderful gift your comment is to me. Being I am not familiar with your name would you be kind and let me know if you are male or female?

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/7/2014 9:28:00 AM A very romantic loving write. The message works very well with your choice of form. Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 12/6/2014 7:48:00 AM Passionate! Sensual! and so romantic! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2014 3:40:00 AM Very impressive Richard!loved the dining on love's bliss much! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:05:00 AM Thanks Upma.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/3/2014 8:01:00 PM mind's eye, hon, the repeating lines are really used well to heighten the affect! great choice of form for content. (always glad to make you smile-re: santa) Light & Love Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:07:00 AM Yes it was a novel idea and I liked the picture you chose as well.

Tim Smith Date: 12/3/2014 8:00:00 PM Very passionate Richard..I like it Tim Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:07:00 AM Thanks Tim.

Eve Roper Date: 12/3/2014 5:06:00 PM Very good, all mysteries will soon be yours blessings eve Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:09:00 AM I always enjoy a good expedition, I am an explorer at heart.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/3/2014 4:03:00 PM Where have you been, working? You should have been home the whole time..Passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 4:05:00 PM ;0)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/3/2014 12:21:00 PM sensual passion abounds in this delightful pen Rick hugs 7 Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 12:56:00 PM Thanks and I appreciate the 7. Nothing like a bit of morning inspiration to cause the pen to rise in passionate verse.

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 12/3/2014 12:04:00 PM This is a very sexy poem so full of passion longing for your wife, Ricard! Really enjoyed the intensity and ardor of it my dear friend. Bet you she loves it. Lol....A 7 for me! Have a lovely afternoon! :) love and hugs! xxxx D. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 12:54:00 PM Thanks for the 7. Your comment made me blush.

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/3/2014 11:41:00 AM I've missed your terzanelle's Richard. You just do this form so beautifully. I've also missed your sensual writes. I was looking for another one of my favorites this afternoon, but....here you are with a sensual terzanelle! Can't get better. Your sweetie will love this one. She's blessed. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 11:48:00 AM I am blessed as well to be with one who captivates me so fully. Thanks for the thoughtful comment Eileen.

David Meade Date: 12/3/2014 11:40:00 AM Anticipation!! Nicely done my friend. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 11:49:00 AM Anticipation is for me the most effective aphrodisiac.

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/3/2014 11:13:00 AM Very romantic Terzanelle Richard. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 11:50:00 AM Thanks Brenda.

Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 10:52:00 AM wonderfully passionate Richard - I love the impact of the repeated line - its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 11:51:00 AM This was a challenging one to get just right. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2014 10:26:00 AM - Together in love you own key .... it is the only key that fits into the gates of Paradise - A beautiful poem to your beloved, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2014 10:32:00 AM Have another look, the system messed up my order but It is now corrected.