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Wafting Leaf

Crimson leaf wafts free To carpet tapestry floor Summer duty done Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved) Placed No. 5 in Descending Grace Contest

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Date: 5/12/2010 9:39:00 AM
Bob, you are awesome whit the haiku. well done on the Haiku, nicel one,..p.d
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your win with this fine poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:06:00 PM
excellent portrait! You don't want capitals at all though...no puncuation either. I loved how you brought in the illusion of martial duty in line 3 (No titles are used either..you repeat the first line as title if needed) Advice from #9 LOL smooch! Light & Love
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:54:00 AM
Another winner, Bob.
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:17:00 AM
Congrats Bob on another great win in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo ...enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on the win. A fine interpretation
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Bob!
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:17:00 PM
Robert, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:04:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Bob. Notice the last line sounds like it comes from a military man like you! Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2010 6:51:00 PM
Robert~ I can see your loving these Haiku's good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 4/22/2010 6:38:00 PM
Yes!..Wish Id thought of it! BG .. Your going to win again..
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