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To beautify him further lacks only a gilded spark divine, love eternal unbound. The night was young, we stood closely, the moment held, we shared a kiss. His incendiary sunshine smile could melt the polar ice and snowy ground. I wade pining for another touch of your lips, silky and warm, rhapsody’s bliss. The night was young, we stood closely, the moment held, we shared a kiss. Lost in thoughts of you, my perfection, with no notice that twilight was nigh, I wade pining for another touch of your lips, silky and warm, rhapsody’s bliss. They’ll say I made a superlative effort, to meet you again, O how they’ll sigh. Lost in thoughts of you, my perfection, with no notice that twilight was nigh, all that was fancy seems hours ago, now only stars make the dark heaven light. They’ll say I made a superlative effort, to meet you again, O how they’ll sigh. To the brightness of a rich jewel, you compared me, are you nowhere in sight? All that was fancy seems hours ago, now only stars make the dark heaven light, The white knolls mocking loudly, “Your lusty young man, nowhere in sight is he!” To the brightness of a rich jewel, you compared me, are you nowhere in sight? Yet I move not a step, hushed by ecstasy, Lord let this not be deaths love story. The white knolls mocking loudly, “Your lusty young man, nowhere in sight is he!” “Ariella, my angel!” Assure me it’s not a mirage, O speak again sweet sound! Yet I move not a step, hushed by ecstasy, Lord let this not be death’s love story. To beautify him further lacks only a gilded spark divine, love eternal unbound.

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Date: 11/21/2023 12:25:00 PM
Seventh Place 12/5/2022 Journey without movement Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
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Date: 12/13/2022 11:02:00 AM
Anaya, congratulations on your win! The love of a longing heart truly shines through your lines like "a gilded spark divine." Blessings.
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Date: 12/13/2022 3:21:00 PM
Sam, I'm grateful for your gracious comment and congratulations! Blessings your way!
Date: 12/6/2022 7:20:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your reflections, beautifully expressed through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 12/13/2022 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Beata, it's good to see you are fine. I am happy I have a poetic style :D! ~Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/5/2022 8:11:00 PM
Love in love with love seeking love alone and melding with the currents rising therefrom, with love being God’s omnipresent energy pervading the universe from microcosm to macrocosm, your enchanting poem takes us on this rapturous journey! Exquisitely penned, Anaya. Warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/6/2022 9:17:00 AM
I am honored you chose me, understood me, and placed me in your truly amazing contest, Unseeking Seeker. Thank you ~Anaya
Date: 12/4/2022 11:17:00 AM
I love a pantoum..I've written so many but not in a while I used to write them with song titles..yours os great and done so well..it flows perfectly with great verses through out
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Date: 12/4/2022 2:40:00 PM
With song titles, sounds interesting. Thank you for your kind comments and encouragement Silent One!
Date: 12/2/2022 8:45:00 AM
Delightfully composed and well-written, Anaya. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/2/2022 8:53:00 AM
Milton, it means so much to me, I believe in you. Thank you, glad you enjoyed! :D
Date: 12/2/2022 6:20:00 AM
they’ll say I made a superlative effort, to meet you again…
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Date: 12/2/2022 7:15:00 AM
I wanted her character to be as intellectual/Old English as possible while in a spiritual sense, her love's journey without movement stands!
Date: 12/1/2022 10:50:00 PM
Excellent. I know how difficult it is to write a pantoum. You did well.
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Date: 12/2/2022 7:26:00 AM
As such, this journey is without movement, being but a choice to align with love, grieving not for false ego's bereavement. My character is suffering while in a romantic state of being. Thank you for the encouragement, Victor, I knew you would like this one! ;)
Date: 12/1/2022 2:38:00 PM
Brilliant poetry Anaya, not an easy form to compose but you've made it look easy. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/1/2022 4:42:00 PM
My first time with the pantoum, Tom, oh and also kind of a first time writing about romance. Love your Santa bashing limericks! :D

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