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Vultures Circling

They soon circle around a death; rapidly after the last breath. While the body is yet still warm, they come, with haste, the greedy swarm. Siblings, children, lost cousins, friends all picking through the odds and ends. Some wailing of a promise made or claiming for a debt unpaid. Who gets the house, the watch of gold? "Much more," they say, "So we've been told." "Secret accounts; a home abroad The jewels left by old aunt Maude, a diamond ring, a fancy car, also, that etching by Renoir". And then, the words that make all swoon: At some time in the afternoon executors enunciate "There's naught left in this estate all given to a home for dogs a while before he popped his clogs". Pick-A-Title, Vol 31 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Date wrote: 24th July 2022

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Date: 7/31/2022 9:13:00 AM
Terry, this is of the highest caliber. You did an excellent job of describing the event, which I can attest to having personally witnessed. Excellent work on the writing.
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/1/2022 7:45:00 AM
I appreciate your comments very much; thank you.
Date: 7/31/2022 2:14:00 AM
A true representation of the hypocrisy and greed expressed soon after a death, especially if he/ she has enormous wealth ! Relatives crowd together like vultures making unnecessary claims ! It is so painful to understand that they value wealth more than the deceased. A great poem, Terry !
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/1/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for visiting and your kind comments
Date: 7/25/2022 3:48:00 PM
there are many of those around, scary, nice poem well described Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/27/2022 6:43:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 7/25/2022 2:37:00 PM
Every dog has it day! Good allegory. Robert
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/27/2022 6:43:00 AM
Appreciate it, Robert.
Date: 7/24/2022 5:33:00 PM
Oh wow, this is fantastic, Terry. I have actually seen it happen, and you described it perfectly. Very nice writing.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/27/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Milton, I, too have witnessed this
Date: 7/24/2022 4:20:00 AM
Terrific, Terry. Good twist on the phrase and some nice images of a not-so-nice all-too-common event. Yay, dogs!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/27/2022 6:45:00 AM
Yep it's gone to the dogs; thanks for your warm comments Jeff

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