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Vultures Circle The Sky

In the shadows, harpies linger as agents provocateur, for the Fallen Watchers, for pecking order. Prostitute mercenaries, addicted to mercury and disorder. Their claws sharp, their cries a shiver, their motive insanity from hell's hateful quiver. They pluck you from the light of day, leave you in the flames to barter the fray, to drown in the sea of faith no more. Till nightfall, where they tend the fires of a black wind, poking signal lures, preying for entropic thunder, and romantic moon, lyres to ascend your spirit for the purpose of dropping you again in despairs pit and swoon. Denoting your abandonment and seclusion, shoeing the fit, wild horses couldn't drag them away. Hoping to find you behind chaos's fire-line, enemy mine, a broken rhyme- not asKing for a new day; a soul adrift, in a sea of doubt, no compass, no sails, no wind, no faith, "tag you're it, hide your eyes and don't count." on being saved from the fade to black from grey lack of faith.

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Date: 3/7/2024 11:55:00 AM
Prostitute mercenaries lol... I like how your poem delves into the darker aspects of human existence, using vivid and evocative imagery to depict the presence of harpies as agents of chaos and despair. The harpies are portrayed as sinister figures, lurking in the shadows and preying on vulnerability and doubt. The use of metaphors such as "prostitute mercenaries" addicted to "mercury and disorder" adds depth to the portrayal of these malevolent forces,
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/8/2024 7:26:00 PM
I think there are worse creatures within the human race. At least the mythological creatures exist to be that way. Sometimes it is hard to imagine (not to be holier than thou art/I have my own insatiable sins) But, seeing some people who are so cold and calculating that it is hard to imagine, that they were once a little boy or little girl is a mind crime and heartbreaking if you spend there contemplating too long. But I try to be equal as I can, describing myth and reality. (Sometimes myths are reality. )
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Silent One
Date: 3/7/2024 11:55:00 AM
highlighting their destructive nature and insatiable appetite for chaos... You did mean the Mythology creatures, right?
Date: 3/7/2024 3:27:00 AM
Dear jude, you have a way with weaving words and metaphors really. What a profound and meaningful write this is. And i love the imagery and depth of what youv expressed here. Especially love the lines “ their motive insanity from hell's hateful quiver. They pluck you from the light of day,” wow soul hitting really! How powerful! “ Hoping to find you behind chaos's fire-line, enemy mine, a broken rhyme- not asKing for a new day; a soul adrift, in a sea of doubt,“ i have no words but! Just this is impeccable really! So many truths woven seamlessly! Fave this is for me
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/8/2024 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Ink Empress. Some beings and situations prey upon other beings and situations and kick you when you are down. Some people are masochists and do it to themselves. The only time it is natural, is when it is the Harpy Eagle. And that lady from the Ozzy Osbourne "Ultimate Sin" LP cover.
Date: 3/6/2024 9:31:00 PM
Winged Harbingers! "snapping fingers with lighter in the air!"
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/8/2024 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Carlene !

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