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Vulnerable

For the first time I need help for the first time my pride took a hike always rose to top now I’m not fresh anymore I seem to flop my vulnerability is exposing my inability to cope with my shortcoming the truth is I am going through a power dip it seems I was brought down from my high hoarse in every game there was a dip in my scores there is a loud back fire in my exhaust the impact knocked me off coarse I cannot believe how many times for help I have to ask even the verses that I write seems lacking…

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Date: 1/24/2015 7:24:00 AM
Matt, I agree with Kajika, your work is emotional. I have been there many times . just remember that for every down there has to be an up. God Bless. D.
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:06:00 AM
Matthew cupido, I love how when you read the poem you can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the awesome work.
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Date: 1/16/2015 2:25:00 AM
thanks

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