Lycia Harding Poet Quatrain

Voyeur Moon

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The voyeur moon has promised she

will hide her light tonight and keep

it dark outside if we'll agree

to let her watch us while we sleep

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09/27/2015

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 9:46 PM LYCIA, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 14, 2016 at 4:35 AM Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Lycia.

Skat A January 13, 2016 at 10:46 PM Lycia, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT **

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2015 at 1:25 PM I enjoyed seeing your entry for super moon contest today. Congrats for the win. Lycia Harding October 11, 2015 at 12:34 PM Thank you, Andie! xoxo

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:35 AM Lycia, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT Lycia Harding October 9, 2015 at 2:20 AM Awwwww....that's cute! Thank you SKAT! wuv LyLy

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2015 at 3:15 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara Lycia Harding October 8, 2015 at 8:45 PM Hi Sara! Thank you, my Dear. xoxo

Jan Allison October 7, 2015 at 3:40 PM delightful imagery Lycia many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Lycia Harding October 7, 2015 at 6:46 PM Thank you, my Dear Jan! xoxo

Eve Roper October 7, 2015 at 3:21 PM Lycia, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve Lycia Harding October 7, 2015 at 6:42 PM Thank you, Eve and thank you so much for the win! Excellent 'current affairs' idea for a contest. Keep em comin!

Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 10:11 PM OH My!!!!! What a lovely piece, Lycia. I so liked this. :) Good luck in the contest!! I loved the rhythm and flow... Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 10:47 PM No, I'm no entering this one, dear. Inspiration hasn't made a visit yet. Lycia Harding September 30, 2015 at 10:30 PM Thank you, Eileen and luck, luck, luck to you as well, if you also enter! xoxo

Eric Boddie September 29, 2015 at 9:19 PM to watch you as you sleep....is a dream I am sure many keep....because you and your words are both the same....simply Beautiful, how could any complain....;) Lycia Harding October 3, 2015 at 5:08 PM Have you watched somebody sleep before? ...*... Its really not that smart ...*... Its bad enough you must watch them snore ...*... but worse to watch them fart!

James Horn September 29, 2015 at 5:37 AM Was going to say enlightening but don't know if that is appropriate or not. Thanks for comment about my Women Poets poem. Jim Horn

Skat A September 28, 2015 at 9:28 PM Lycia, this is beautiful.... I feel her looking at me. SKAT Lycia Harding September 28, 2015 at 10:13 PM You wish, SKAT, put your clothes back on! Heh heh. Thank you, this was almost as fun as your Drunken Moon

Paul Callus September 28, 2015 at 11:12 AM A lovely and flowing quatrain aided by smooth rhyme. Like the image of a voyeur moon watching discreetly. ~ gl in the contest. // paul Lycia Harding September 28, 2015 at 2:26 PM PS - I find that your comments themselves are always lovely and flowing and smoothly laid out. Gl to you as well if you enter! Xoxo Lycia Harding September 28, 2015 at 2:21 PM Thank you Paul. Yes , you nailed it - shes prepared to sell out everything shes about as long as she can still get her peep on. Shes not motherly, shes freaky!