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Such quiet dwells, when I walk in... this place, so calm and void of din. But still, a rhapsody within I hear- so beautiful, akin to music from a violin and angels singing hymns therein; fathomless sounds that soon begin to race my heart, goose-bump my skin. Eternity unfolds herein... I'll rest in peace with no chagrin. The story of my life will spin my deeds I hope, with grace, not sin. And, here I'll be, frame, old and thin; in mausoleum rest with kin. But angels will my soul unpin- as God unveils His welcome grin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/10/2018 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra. The momorhyme sounded effortless, and the mandatory words were integrated seamlessly.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/12/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes, for your visit, congrats and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/10/2018 12:26:00 PM
Amazing mono rhyme Sandra, usually the rhymes start to sound forced after 6 or 8 but not this time, this is a master class in mono rhyme, congrats on two worthy wins!!
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Date: 4/12/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, John, for your congratulations and very supportive comments, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 4/8/2018 1:09:00 PM
Awesome, Sandra. A mot deserving win with this breathtaking poem. A definite FAVE for me.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Line, for the wonderful, supportive comments for the fave! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/7/2018 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful rhyming and inspirational poem. I found this also soothing.
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Date: 4/9/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate your uplifting comments and congratulations so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/5/2018 5:27:00 PM
Excellent write dear friend, .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/5/2018 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! I really appreciate your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/5/2018 4:25:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! on your win, my friend! What an enjoyable well-crafted, beautiful piece to read. Well done! Hugs. Pandita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/5/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pandita, for your visit, congrats, and lovely comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/5/2018 10:17:00 AM
great monorhyme sweet Sandra, everything about it beautiful. thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/5/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for the great contest and for my placement! So pleased that you enjoyed it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/3/2018 3:23:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned monorhyme, you made eternity sound very dreamy . .
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for another inspiring contest. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and thank you very much for my podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/31/2018 5:28:00 AM
I just read this again. Made me feel good. Happy Easter, Kai
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you again, Kai! Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Date: 3/22/2018 2:53:00 AM
Wow, that is amazing. Such a blast of rhyme. And still and still your poem flows and is not hard laboured despite all those ...ins. Fantastic. Many wishes to you and may eternity settle slowly...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai, for your very uplifting and complimentary comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 3/17/2018 8:49:00 PM
Wow. You have certainly done a wonderful job with this. Congratulations to you already it is haunting and lovely.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sian, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments! I appreciate them so much. I like your new Avatar too! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/16/2018 2:56:00 PM
Dear Sandra, you blew it out of the park. A wonderful poem, charming form, and deep lovely emotion. A FAVE for me.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Line! I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and so appreciative and honored that you saved it as a Fave! Hugs, Sandra :)
Date: 3/16/2018 8:41:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Interesting work. Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

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