Voyage To Eternity

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Such quiet dwells, when I walk in...
this place, so calm and void of din.
But still, a rhapsody within
I hear- so beautiful, akin
to music from a violin
and angels singing hymns therein;
fathomless sounds that soon begin
to race my heart, goose-bump my skin.

Eternity unfolds herein...
I'll rest in peace with no chagrin.
The story of my life will spin
my deeds I hope, with grace, not sin.
And, here I'll be, frame, old and thin;
in mausoleum rest with kin.
But angels will my soul unpin-
as God unveils His welcome grin.

Copyright © Sandra Haight | Year Posted 2018

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Agnes Krampe Date: 4/10/2018 7:40:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Sandra. The momorhyme sounded effortless, and the mandatory words were integrated seamlessly. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/12/2018 4:29:00 PM Thank you, Agnes, for your visit, congrats and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton Date: 4/10/2018 12:26:00 PM Amazing mono rhyme Sandra, usually the rhymes start to sound forced after 6 or 8 but not this time, this is a master class in mono rhyme, congrats on two worthy wins!! Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/12/2018 4:27:00 PM Thank you very much, John, for your congratulations and very supportive comments, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Much appreciated. Sandra

Line Gauthier Date: 4/8/2018 1:09:00 PM Awesome, Sandra. A mot deserving win with this breathtaking poem. A definite FAVE for me. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/9/2018 2:36:00 PM Thank you, Line, for the wonderful, supportive comments for the fave! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry Date: 4/7/2018 8:16:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful rhyming and inspirational poem. I found this also soothing. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/9/2018 2:35:00 PM Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate your uplifting comments and congratulations so much. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper Date: 4/5/2018 5:27:00 PM Excellent write dear friend, .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/5/2018 8:40:00 PM Thank you so much, Eve! I really appreciate your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/5/2018 4:25:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS! on your win, my friend! What an enjoyable well-crafted, beautiful piece to read. Well done! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/5/2018 8:39:00 PM Thank you so much, Pandita, for your visit, congrats, and lovely comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/5/2018 10:17:00 AM great monorhyme sweet Sandra, everything about it beautiful. thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/5/2018 8:38:00 PM Thank you, Laura, for the great contest and for my placement! So pleased that you enjoyed it! Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France Date: 4/3/2018 3:23:00 PM Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned monorhyme, you made eternity sound very dreamy . . Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/3/2018 4:25:00 PM Thank you, Constance, for another inspiring contest. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and thank you very much for my podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/31/2018 5:28:00 AM I just read this again. Made me feel good. Happy Easter, Kai Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 4/3/2018 4:24:00 PM Thank you again, Kai! Much appreciated. Sandra :)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/22/2018 2:53:00 AM Wow, that is amazing. Such a blast of rhyme. And still and still your poem flows and is not hard laboured despite all those ...ins. Fantastic. Many wishes to you and may eternity settle slowly... Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/22/2018 8:38:00 AM Thank you so much, Kai, for your very uplifting and complimentary comments. Much appreciated! Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 3/17/2018 8:49:00 PM Wow. You have certainly done a wonderful job with this. Congratulations to you already it is haunting and lovely. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/18/2018 7:59:00 PM Thank you very much, Sian, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments! I appreciate them so much. I like your new Avatar too! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier Date: 3/16/2018 2:56:00 PM Dear Sandra, you blew it out of the park. A wonderful poem, charming form, and deep lovely emotion. A FAVE for me. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/18/2018 7:55:00 PM Thank you, Line! I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and so appreciative and honored that you saved it as a Fave! Hugs, Sandra :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2018 8:41:00 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Interesting work. Sara Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/18/2018 7:53:00 PM Thank you very much, Sara, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra