Sandra Haight Poet Monorhyme

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 For The Contest,
"Between Here and Eternity" 
 Sponsor: Sotto Poet

Voyage To Eternity

Such quiet dwells, when I walk in...
this place, so calm and void of din.
But still, a rhapsody within
I hear- so beautiful, akin
to music from a violin
and angels singing hymns therein;
fathomless sounds that soon begin
to race my heart, goose-bump my skin.

Eternity unfolds herein...
I'll rest in peace with no chagrin.
The story of my life will spin
my deeds I hope, with grace, not sin.
And, here I'll be, frame, old and thin;
in mausoleum rest with kin.
But angels will my soul unpin-
as God unveils His welcome grin.

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Agnes Krampe April 10, 2018 at 7:40 PM Congratulations on your win, Sandra. The momorhyme sounded effortless, and the mandatory words were integrated seamlessly. Sandra Haight April 12, 2018 at 4:29 PM Thank you, Agnes, for your visit, congrats and uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton April 10, 2018 at 12:26 PM Amazing mono rhyme Sandra, usually the rhymes start to sound forced after 6 or 8 but not this time, this is a master class in mono rhyme, congrats on two worthy wins!! Sandra Haight April 12, 2018 at 4:27 PM Thank you very much, John, for your congratulations and very supportive comments, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Much appreciated. Sandra

Line Gauthier April 8, 2018 at 1:09 PM Awesome, Sandra. A mot deserving win with this breathtaking poem. A definite FAVE for me. Sandra Haight April 9, 2018 at 2:36 PM Thank you, Line, for the wonderful, supportive comments for the fave! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra

Susan Gentry April 7, 2018 at 8:16 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful rhyming and inspirational poem. I found this also soothing. Sandra Haight April 9, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you, Susan. I really appreciate your uplifting comments and congratulations so much. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper April 5, 2018 at 5:27 PM Excellent write dear friend, .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Sandra Haight April 5, 2018 at 8:40 PM Thank you so much, Eve! I really appreciate your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos April 5, 2018 at 4:25 PM CONGRATULATIONS! on your win, my friend! What an enjoyable well-crafted, beautiful piece to read. Well done! Hugs. Pandita Sandra Haight April 5, 2018 at 8:39 PM Thank you so much, Pandita, for your visit, congrats, and lovely comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars April 5, 2018 at 10:17 AM great monorhyme sweet Sandra, everything about it beautiful. thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Sandra Haight April 5, 2018 at 8:38 PM Thank you, Laura, for the great contest and for my placement! So pleased that you enjoyed it! Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France April 3, 2018 at 3:23 PM Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned monorhyme, you made eternity sound very dreamy . . Sandra Haight April 3, 2018 at 4:25 PM Thank you, Constance, for another inspiring contest. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and thank you very much for my podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Kai Michael Neumann March 31, 2018 at 5:28 AM I just read this again. Made me feel good. Happy Easter, Kai Sandra Haight April 3, 2018 at 4:24 PM Thank you again, Kai! Much appreciated. Sandra :)

Kai Michael Neumann March 22, 2018 at 2:53 AM Wow, that is amazing. Such a blast of rhyme. And still and still your poem flows and is not hard laboured despite all those ...ins. Fantastic. Many wishes to you and may eternity settle slowly... Sandra Haight March 22, 2018 at 8:38 AM Thank you so much, Kai, for your very uplifting and complimentary comments. Much appreciated! Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi March 17, 2018 at 8:49 PM Wow. You have certainly done a wonderful job with this. Congratulations to you already it is haunting and lovely. Sandra Haight March 18, 2018 at 7:59 PM Thank you very much, Sian, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments! I appreciate them so much. I like your new Avatar too! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier March 16, 2018 at 2:56 PM Dear Sandra, you blew it out of the park. A wonderful poem, charming form, and deep lovely emotion. A FAVE for me. Sandra Haight March 18, 2018 at 7:55 PM Thank you, Line! I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and so appreciative and honored that you saved it as a Fave! Hugs, Sandra :)

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2018 at 8:41 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Interesting work. Sara Sandra Haight March 18, 2018 at 7:53 PM Thank you very much, Sara, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra