Voyage of Self Discovery

We are born ---
  we live, we die;
  and in between we gaze the aftermath of the gods...
  and the great shining stars at night ---
  with greater grip in old age than fleeting youth;

More fiercely we cling to ebbing mortality,
  as if there is more in elder years,
  and as a fledgling we only know a rising sun;
  for it never sets in first-time life,
  whilst excitement drifts like snow in later years,
  its coming appreciated all the more,
  like the end of a mystery movie nearing...
  
Was it good? ---
   or was it bad?

Will we ever see the credits?








***Meditations on Mortality***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/10/2018 2:33:00 PM
- Regarding the last question, Keith ... nobody can answer that - I find this poem interesting and deep - In pain we are born to this earth ... and often we leave it in pain - hugs and lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/10/2018 10:22:00 AM
wow, love this write, with a great message too
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:03:00 PM
Very positive and uplifting to us all people. Love it! restores my faith in youth.
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Date: 3/4/2018 11:27:00 PM
If blessed we will see eternity and the credits my friend. This gem has great depth, wisdom , beauty and superb flow.. You always deliver a gem. I stand in awe of your style and its likeness to the classic poetry o old.. A fav..
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Date: 3/3/2018 8:57:00 PM
Hello Keith, your poem is good.I like the way you describe things in your poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/4/2018 11:09:00 AM
Hope you have a good weekend Darlene, I'm fond of the ending in this one;-)
Date: 3/3/2018 4:56:00 PM
I found this very deep and touching. Reminds me of that poem by Dylan Thomas...Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night. One of my favorites. Will we see the credits? What a superb ending. I sure hope so. Blessings and thanks for your lovely visit to my Veil poem.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/4/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I do like Dylan Thomas --- I haven't read that poem in a while; your Veil poem was a joy to read;-)
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