Voyage

"There are no passengers on spaceship Earth. We are all crew"- Marshall McLuhan Spaceships explore the universe On voyages light years away Galactic wonders so diverse Spaceships explore the universe Where twinkle of stars intersperse With new planets seen day by day Spaceships explore the universe On voyages light years away

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2024 9:18:00 AM

You did this very well, Joseph Congrats on your win

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2024 3:04:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, I like the quote too, hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Voyage" write. Guess this is one trip I will never take. I do not like long flights.... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/1/2024 2:40:00 AM

It's a pity we cannot achieve a spaceship with the speed of light. We might find a better planet where to live.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2024 1:35:00 PM

Great main line. I enjoyed reading this one. I am thinking it is for a contest, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page to say congratulations. I hope this has been a great Easter Sunday for you and your family. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/31/2024 9:38:00 AM

Lovely triolet Joseph. Flows so nicely! I hope the spaceships carry friendlies! :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/30/2024 7:23:00 PM

Space is beyond magical ! I can understand why so many spaceships are exploring the universe. Your thoughts take me there, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/30/2024 5:16:00 PM

Awesome write very well written I enjoyed the word play many blessings.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/29/2024 9:31:00 PM

I love this poem. I like the triolet style and this one enthralls me.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/29/2024 4:50:00 PM

Loved the quote preceding your Triolet, which was superbly done by the way. A great contest entry. Best wishes with the contest, have a delightful evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/29/2024 7:25:00 AM

Great take on the contest... Best of luck..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/29/2024 6:12:00 AM

Thanks to the scientific explorations--our knowledge is slowly expanding. A thoughtful, meaningful poem, Joseph.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/29/2024 4:46:00 AM

How galactic and cosmically moving is this creativr take on the prompt dear joseph. I love your wordplay and depth of what youv delivered here.best wishes for the contest