Joseph May Poet Triolet

Voyage

 "There are no passengers on spaceship Earth. We are all crew"- 
 Marshall McLuhan
              
 
 Spaceships explore the universe
  On voyages light years away
 Galactic wonders so diverse
  Spaceships explore the universe
 Where twinkle of stars intersperse
  With new planets seen day by day
 Spaceships explore the universe
  On voyages light years away

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Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2024 at 9:18 AM You did this very well, Joseph Congrats on your win

Constance La France April 7, 2024 at 3:04 PM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, I like the quote too, hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2024 at 11:37 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Voyage" write. Guess this is one trip I will never take. I do not like long flights.... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Victor Buhagiar April 1, 2024 at 2:40 AM It's a pity we cannot achieve a spaceship with the speed of light. We might find a better planet where to live.

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2024 at 1:35 PM Great main line. I enjoyed reading this one. I am thinking it is for a contest, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page to say congratulations. I hope this has been a great Easter Sunday for you and your family. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler March 31, 2024 at 9:38 AM Lovely triolet Joseph. Flows so nicely! I hope the spaceships carry friendlies! :)

Brandy Nicole March 30, 2024 at 7:23 PM Space is beyond magical ! I can understand why so many spaceships are exploring the universe. Your thoughts take me there, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen March 30, 2024 at 5:16 PM Awesome write very well written I enjoyed the word play many blessings.

Hilda Greenhough March 29, 2024 at 9:31 PM I love this poem. I like the triolet style and this one enthralls me.

Silent One March 29, 2024 at 7:25 AM Great take on the contest... Best of luck..

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2024 at 6:12 AM Thanks to the scientific explorations--our knowledge is slowly expanding. A thoughtful, meaningful poem, Joseph.

Ink Empress March 29, 2024 at 4:46 AM How galactic and cosmically moving is this creativr take on the prompt dear joseph. I love your wordplay and depth of what youv delivered here.best wishes for the contest