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A beckoning charmer, Desire’s erogenous Flower gratifies homage. I justly kneel… Love must now obey Pleasure’s quest ridden subjugation till unchaste voracious waves, xenogenous, yield zealotry. For Charlotte Puddifoot’s Sensual ABC Contest September 25, 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:11:00 AM

Wonderful write Eileen! Congrats on superb win!

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:50:00 PM

Eileen, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:46:00 PM

Congrats Eileen on your win!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:06:00 AM

Thank you, Balveen. Kind of you to visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:18:00 PM

wow! this was a good one to finally get to see!! BIG congrats on your win, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:06:00 AM

:) Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad that you enjoyed this write. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 5:04:00 PM

Like always, Eileen, your write is wonderful. Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:07:00 AM

Like always, your kindness shines, dear. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 4:27:00 PM

This is wonderful Eileen. They are not easy to write. Congratulations on your outstanding placement! #7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. Yes, it took me a LONG time to get it where I wanted it to go. Changed words now and again. I appreciate your lovely visit. Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 4:00:00 PM

eileen, this is a very well written abc, you made great word choices and put them together so well to form a poem that was coherent and had depth - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:09:00 AM

Thank you for my placement, Charlotte. I try...so hard to get that first placement with you. Finally manage with Andrea....I'll keep trying. Hugs, dear.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 2:12:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/4/2015 12:10:00 AM

Thank you very much for your visit, Jan. Congrats to you as well.... Hugs.

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/29/2015 3:31:00 AM

Foreplay that finds the fire of famished sensitivity. I love the development of this poem, it's sultry sequence of skilled lust...aggressively sexy, unhindered heat that unfastens my desire Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/29/2015 1:28:00 PM

Eagle. You come once more to visit. :) I wish you would also write more often so I could visit new writes from you for I have read and reread so many of them. Thank you for your warm post on this poem. Your posts...like your poems...are enchanting. Hugs

James Inman

Date: 9/27/2015 3:40:00 PM

Sensual, yes, less erotic in my mind then some, but that is probably a good thing. Very well written, Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 11:55:00 AM

Sensual poetry is right up my alley, James. I write many sensual and passionate pieces. I like to think of them as sensual and not erotic. I don't know if I will do well in this contest, but....at least I tried. I'm glad you don't consider it erotic. :) If you want a taste of my sensual poetry, you could read The Journey of Your Lips or Erogenously Yours. This form did limit me in some ways. Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2015 3:30:00 PM

I must say that you have done a great job with both this form and its content. You reined in any temptation to go beyond the limits, and I think that should work in your favour. Love the feel of those voracious waves! hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 11:56:00 AM

Dear, I'm glad you think so. At least I have the contentment of knowing I didn't go over my limits of comfort. ;) Though that OOOOOOOO was really pestering me. ;) You always cheer me up, Paul. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2015 5:47:00 AM

I am impressed, I didn't realize till the end that this was an ABC entry. If ABCs where taught like this I would have stayed in school longer.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/28/2015 11:58:00 AM

If you didn't realize it was an ABC entry...then I feel that I've accomplished my purpose, Richard. :) Thanks ever so much for your kind post. Yes....you brought a smile with that school comment. Perhaps it's because you want to visit the Librarian??? Yes, I still remember that poem....funny how things stay in the mind. ;) Your Liquid Dreams....still sings.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/27/2015 12:36:00 AM

Wow, you sure captured the essence of that painting! Loved this!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/27/2015 1:41:00 AM

I've used this painting before, dear....To be honest...it simply makes me...melt. Oh...the beauty. The words I have written just....pale. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/26/2015 4:33:00 PM

I justly kneel, love must now obey... Love that line.. So very sensual this is.. He in command and She serves his urge.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2015 11:45:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie. I think it isn't....sensual enough after reading some of the entries. Never mind. At least I won't be accused of going overboard....for once! Hugs :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/26/2015 3:14:00 PM

love must be obeyed! this has power in your words and like passion demands, kneel before the master...Nicely done!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2015 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, dear. It has drained the life out of me. I hope it does well. Hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/26/2015 2:03:00 PM

Wonderfully done my dear....love this yielding sensuous write! Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2015 3:43:00 PM

I appreciate the kind words, Cecilia. Not sure how it will do, but....here's hoping. Hugs

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/26/2015 1:35:00 PM

Oh, I like it, I like it - I really do, read it twice. Hope you had fun. I think I'll go read it again. Very good ... CayCay

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2015 11:45:00 PM

Oh....you are so sweet, CayCay. I think my write is too mild after having read some of the others. I have half a mind to pull it form the contest. Oh well...Your encouragement is sweet. Thank you. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 12:18:00 PM

oooh very sensual Eileen good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 12:57:00 PM

I'm struggling with mine still got to end it - I'm out of my comfort zone to be honest:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/26/2015 12:22:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie....it killed me! To try to do sensual...with such strict restrictions....took ages. I hope it has a ghost of a chance. Hugs!!!