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Voracious Waves

A beckoning charmer,
Desire’s erogenous Flower
gratifies homage.
I justly kneel… 
Love must now obey
Pleasure’s quest ridden subjugation
till unchaste voracious waves, xenogenous, yield zealotry.

For Charlotte Puddifoot’s Sensual ABC Contest
September 25, 2015

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/8/2015 2:11:00 AM Wonderful write Eileen! Congrats on superb win! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/4/2015 6:50:00 PM Eileen, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 10/3/2015 11:46:00 PM Congrats Eileen on your win! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:06:00 AM Thank you, Balveen. Kind of you to visit.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2015 7:18:00 PM wow! this was a good one to finally get to see!! BIG congrats on your win, Eileen. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:06:00 AM :) Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad that you enjoyed this write. Hugs

Eve Roper Date: 10/3/2015 5:04:00 PM Like always, Eileen, your write is wonderful. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:07:00 AM Like always, your kindness shines, dear. Thank you.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/3/2015 4:27:00 PM This is wonderful Eileen. They are not easy to write. Congratulations on your outstanding placement! #7 Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:08:00 AM Thank you, Connie. Yes, it took me a LONG time to get it where I wanted it to go. Changed words now and again. I appreciate your lovely visit. Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/3/2015 4:00:00 PM eileen, this is a very well written abc, you made great word choices and put them together so well to form a poem that was coherent and had depth - congrats on your win in my contest! :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:09:00 AM Thank you for my placement, Charlotte. I try...so hard to get that first placement with you. Finally manage with Andrea....I'll keep trying. Hugs, dear.

Jan Allison Date: 10/3/2015 2:12:00 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 10/4/2015 12:10:00 AM Thank you very much for your visit, Jan. Congrats to you as well.... Hugs.

Justin Bordner Date: 9/29/2015 3:31:00 AM Foreplay that finds the fire of famished sensitivity. I love the development of this poem, it's sultry sequence of skilled lust...aggressively sexy, unhindered heat that unfastens my desire Eileen...J.A.B. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/29/2015 1:28:00 PM Eagle. You come once more to visit. :) I wish you would also write more often so I could visit new writes from you for I have read and reread so many of them. Thank you for your warm post on this poem. Your posts...like your poems...are enchanting. Hugs

James Inman Date: 9/27/2015 3:40:00 PM Sensual, yes, less erotic in my mind then some, but that is probably a good thing. Very well written, Eileen. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/28/2015 11:55:00 AM Sensual poetry is right up my alley, James. I write many sensual and passionate pieces. I like to think of them as sensual and not erotic. I don't know if I will do well in this contest, but....at least I tried. I'm glad you don't consider it erotic. :) If you want a taste of my sensual poetry, you could read The Journey of Your Lips or Erogenously Yours. This form did limit me in some ways. Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus Date: 9/27/2015 3:30:00 PM I must say that you have done a great job with both this form and its content. You reined in any temptation to go beyond the limits, and I think that should work in your favour. Love the feel of those voracious waves! hugs // paul Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/28/2015 11:56:00 AM Dear, I'm glad you think so. At least I have the contentment of knowing I didn't go over my limits of comfort. ;) Though that OOOOOOOO was really pestering me. ;) You always cheer me up, Paul. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/27/2015 5:47:00 AM I am impressed, I didn't realize till the end that this was an ABC entry. If ABCs where taught like this I would have stayed in school longer. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/28/2015 11:58:00 AM If you didn't realize it was an ABC entry...then I feel that I've accomplished my purpose, Richard. :) Thanks ever so much for your kind post. Yes....you brought a smile with that school comment. Perhaps it's because you want to visit the Librarian??? Yes, I still remember that poem....funny how things stay in the mind. ;) Your Liquid Dreams....still sings.

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/27/2015 12:36:00 AM Wow, you sure captured the essence of that painting! Loved this! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/27/2015 1:41:00 AM I've used this painting before, dear....To be honest...it simply makes me...melt. Oh...the beauty. The words I have written just....pale. Hugs

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/26/2015 4:33:00 PM I justly kneel, love must now obey... Love that line.. So very sensual this is.. He in command and She serves his urge. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/26/2015 11:45:00 PM Thanks, sweetie. I think it isn't....sensual enough after reading some of the entries. Never mind. At least I won't be accused of going overboard....for once! Hugs :)

Casarah Nance Date: 9/26/2015 3:14:00 PM love must be obeyed! this has power in your words and like passion demands, kneel before the master...Nicely done! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/26/2015 3:37:00 PM Thank you, dear. It has drained the life out of me. I hope it does well. Hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 9/26/2015 2:03:00 PM Wonderfully done my dear....love this yielding sensuous write! Hugs Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/26/2015 3:43:00 PM I appreciate the kind words, Cecilia. Not sure how it will do, but....here's hoping. Hugs

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/26/2015 1:35:00 PM Oh, I like it, I like it - I really do, read it twice. Hope you had fun. I think I'll go read it again. Very good ... CayCay Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/26/2015 11:45:00 PM Oh....you are so sweet, CayCay. I think my write is too mild after having read some of the others. I have half a mind to pull it form the contest. Oh well...Your encouragement is sweet. Thank you. Hugs

Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2015 12:18:00 PM oooh very sensual Eileen good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2015 12:57:00 PM I'm struggling with mine still got to end it - I'm out of my comfort zone to be honest:-) hugs jan xx Eileen Manassian Date: 9/26/2015 12:22:00 PM Thanks, sweetie....it killed me! To try to do sensual...with such strict restrictions....took ages. I hope it has a ghost of a chance. Hugs!!!