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Void of polarity exchange -ITQ

Melding with sunset’s fading light Before the day turned into night Magnetism rose, heightened delight I drew in God’s grace, byte by byte The happenstance was simply this From head to toe, I felt pure bliss Caress of Divine Mother’s kiss Rapture leaving nothing amiss Void of polarity exchange Oft gives birth to soul stirrings strange Enhancing vibrational range Signalling it’s time for a change Lamp of love’s lit in cave of heart Feel therein bliss ignition start

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/27/2024 11:38:00 AM

Dear US, this is written so well. You did an amazing job with this form. Congratulations on your top win! PS: Still under the weather but feeling a little better. Hugs and blessings...Charlie

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/27/2024 12:24:00 PM

Wish you get well soon, Charles. Thanks for hosting and the recognition, delighted you enjoyed

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/27/2024 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/wonderful write. We need silence/peace in life... Have a blessed day...........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/27/2024 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paula dear

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/9/2024 3:29:00 PM

I enjoyed reading about spiritual awakening. Your poem was succinct with some outstanding metaphors, i.e., 'caress of Divine Mother's Kiss.' I also enjoyed this alliterative line: 'oft gives birth to soul stirrings strange.' enjoy your evening, Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/9/2024 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, Sara dear. Divine Mother’s kiss may be taken as literal, not metaphorical, equated to the surge of bliss magnetism cascading within.

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/9/2024 12:27:00 PM

Heya Seeker, sorry I haven’t been around in a bit, you certainly are tapping into all the right frequencies here, forgive my lame analogy, but it actually feels like tuning in from one brilliant song on the radio to another, excellent poem, wish I could meditate! cheers David

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/9/2024 5:47:00 PM

Hello David! Meditation is simply befriending silence, looking at thoughts that arise as external objects that happened to appear in our awareness, which we do not own and simply look at in astonishment. In time, thoughts recede and we then imbibe divine magnetism felt vividly and unmistakably.

Silent One

Date: 1/9/2024 11:46:00 AM

Your poem is a luminous exploration of divine connection and spiritual awakening. The carefully chosen words, metaphors, and rhythmic flow contribute to the overall sense of serenity and enlightenment. It's a poetic journey that invites readers to reflect on their own spiritual experiences and the transformative power of encountering the divine...

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/9/2024 5:44:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One. I’m so happy you found value in these words, God bless