Voices In the Walls

There are voices trapped within the walls
along the halls that link old rooms
and childish laughter bubbles the sleek designer paint
new owners placed to seal away the past;
the color memory keeps bleeding through where sunshine warms,
window-framed like children's silhouettes.

Our names, cement prisoners,
call from the curving walk
where hopscotch chalk faded in the rain.

The hill across the road heaves a heavy sigh
and echoes of our play escape in ripples of the leaves.

Thin, haunting voices draw me backward,
like the calls of baying hounds alerting on a scented trail;
there will never be treasure more rare
than the cherished memories embedded
in the house we first called home.

© September 11, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Alex Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 9:21 PM
"Like the calls on baying hounds" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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January 28, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Faye, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA
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January 22, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Faye..
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January 20, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Faey, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
Ryerson Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:19 AM
This also reminds me of the stone house I grew up in at BJU...Don't know if you remember it but it set back across the street from the old gym. It is what inspired my poem 'Wild Cherries' (the cherry tree in the back yard)...Vicki and I walked over there during a visit back in the 90's and it bought back a flood of memories but everything seemed so SMALL compared to when I was a youngster...
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September 15, 2015 at 11:03 AM
So you're hearing voices now are you Faye? Just kidding of course! This is absolutely a brilliant recall of childhood memories...I was especially drawn to verse one where you speak of the memories bleeding through the sleek new paint. WOW...
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Faye, I love the imagery you used in this wonderful poem! Excellent metaphors! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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