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Voice In the Night

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a silence falls
with heavy heart
and breath caught short
beneath a moonless sky
while a shadow of an echo
resonates as if to say
i told you so
i told you so



AP: 1st place 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 11/18/2023 1:33:00 AM
Where do we go in the night and who visits us in dreams? An unexplored world. It’s amazing how the voice adds an unexpected overlay. I hope you are surviving well Line. Lovely to see your poems.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/20/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jean ~
Date: 11/14/2023 4:21:00 PM
Those moments come to everyone now and then ... I just roll over and go to sleep, and they're gone ... You've expressed such times well here, Line. Great work!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kelly.
Date: 10/30/2023 8:25:00 PM
Line, i hate when that happens… haha really nownot a scene i’d like to find myself in. Not omly for the in you face of it, but the scary setting of hearing it. Hmmm. Dynamic pen! Bravo!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2023 4:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sally, for the much appreciated comment ~
Date: 10/18/2023 8:48:00 PM
A haunting write!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2023 9:02:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Have a lovely day ~
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