Voice In the Night

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a silence falls with heavy heart and breath caught short beneath a moonless sky while a shadow of an echo resonates as if to say i told you so i told you so AP: 1st place 2023 Posted on October 18, 2023

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Jean Murray

Date: 11/18/2023 1:33:00 AM

Where do we go in the night and who visits us in dreams? An unexplored world. It’s amazing how the voice adds an unexpected overlay. I hope you are surviving well Line. Lovely to see your poems.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/20/2023 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jean ~

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/14/2023 4:21:00 PM

Those moments come to everyone now and then ... I just roll over and go to sleep, and they're gone ... You've expressed such times well here, Line. Great work!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2023 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kelly.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/30/2023 8:25:00 PM

Line, i hate when that happens… haha really nownot a scene i’d like to find myself in. Not omly for the in you face of it, but the scary setting of hearing it. Hmmm. Dynamic pen! Bravo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2023 4:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sally, for the much appreciated comment ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/18/2023 8:48:00 PM

A haunting write!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/19/2023 9:02:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Have a lovely day ~