Voice In Hiding

Hiding here inside my closet, I feel safe in the dark knowing on a pile of sheets lies my very psyche; it's only a thought, yet I am unhurt among drawers… so I curl and stare blank, imbibing bits of gentle murmurings that whisper on hangers as they sway with the lint...I strain to listen but prickly voices gush out of reach from the sleeves of a night like a conversation behind closed knobs… I hear yet can't quite grasp what my heart wants to say in low dips ; like a tremolo carrying mould of twilight... it hums all sermons of a Sunday church bell speaking in tongues I knew once...long ago. The moon folds around me in black suds washing a laundry of venting desire, only to find myself trapped by needles…I feel a stab, a grating chill: perhaps, I have no language when no one wants to listen.
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Sergi Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Hi nette: You have epitomized a profound thoughts and desires. Congratulations!
Sergi Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Hi nette: You have epitomized profound thoughts and desires. Congratulations!
Devnath  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:09 AM
A great congratulation my lovely friend, bl
Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Greetings Nette. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
O'Leary Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 6:07 AM
Great poem... nice imagery... congratulations on your win!!
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on your win! Made me reread and think...
Dalei Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on ur top win. A powerful write. Enjoyed.............//:) hugs
Mcclain Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Hi Nette, Wonderful imagery. I feel like I'm right there in that closet too. Congrats on your impressive 1st place win. Cheers, Brian
Nance Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:03 PM
I had a feeling I read this before, but it was so great I enjoyed reading it again, and the funny thing, I was going to praise your last line... then I scrolled through your comments and found mine from before and I already had! Thank you for entering, you're awesome :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Congratulations! One to ponder
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 4:49 PM
A beautifully penned poem Nette such deep imagery congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Every line is spell-binding...a fave! Congrats to you, Nette!! Hugs, Rhonda
Reams Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Congrats on this win. I love the part speaking in tongues. Great write!
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 11:14 PM
voice is loud and clear ..the topper.Binabati kita sa panalo. Love>rajat
Ebbs Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Congrats Nette, great job!
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Absolutely the best, Nette, a real gem. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Congrats again Nette! Feels like deja vu...haha. It seems tuwing pumupunta ako dito, it's always to congratulate you. Yey! mabuhay ang pinoy! Hugs and smiles :)
Ryerson Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Well dear lady, I am proud to say I have commented on this haunting gem before and it's even better the second time around...I LOVE seeing this part of your soul. Oh, by the way, you DO have language now because I am listening and so are many others and oh what language it is! Congratulations - Tim
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March 9, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Nette, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
Avery Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:45 PM
I love this! Very nice work, I hope to read more in the near future
Anish Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:23 PM
There are people out there who are listening to you when they read your fine words. I am one of them! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Devnath  Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Excellent cool poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Eastman Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Thank you for entering my contest with this amazing poem! I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on the win.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Firstly nobody can ever resist listening to ur words nette, secondly don't u scare us wid this nice imagery of urs ,,, well penned,,, congrats on win !
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Frightening, so awful when those supposedly closest to you hurt you and refuse to listen, I hid a a girl friends house above her garage. BIG HUGS Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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