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Vivid View Visual 3

Splashes of scarlet and violet blend into blue heavens
While soft, white, feathery clouds rise like angels taking flight
Over memories of Monet’s Artist's Garden at Giverny.


© Connie Marcum Wong

Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 
Contest Name Glorious Sijo Fields 
February 7, 2015

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/31/2017 7:15:00 PM

Lovely - few words that paint very vivid imagery.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/13/2015 2:06:00 AM

This is just gorgeous, both the poem and photo. Amazing work!"While soft, white, feathery clouds rise like angels taking flight"...yes, those clouds are glorious! Always, Laura

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2015 1:26:00 PM

Awesome Connie ;) congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest xxx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/8/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thank you very much Wilma. I appreciate your comment. Cheers, Connie

Cona Adams

Date: 3/5/2015 7:32:00 AM

A perfect Sijo, Connie. Well done!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you very much Cona. I appreciate your comments. Blessings, Connie

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:51:00 PM

CONNIE, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Scat. She sure had some pretty pictures to choose from. Cheers, Connie

David Mohn

Date: 2/11/2015 6:57:00 PM

Just beautiful Connie...big congrats to you!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/11/2015 10:46:00 PM

Thank you very much David. I am sitting here falling asleep at the computer. I have so little free time I hate to leave and go take a cat nap. Cheers, Connie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2015 1:27:00 AM

Wow what a perfect paint Connie! Congrats on ur win!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/11/2015 10:47:00 PM

I appreciate your comment Dr. Sharma. Thank you. Cheers, Connie

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/10/2015 7:52:00 AM

I see you won with this gem. Of course you did. You have painted a scene of breathless beauty that lingers in the mind.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/11/2015 10:49:00 PM

What a lovely comment you left for me Monterey. I appreciate your sweet comment. Thank you very much. Cheers, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2015 10:33:00 PM

Beautiful write Connie Congrats on your win

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 12:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph. So nice to hear from you. I hope you are well. Happy early Valentine's Day to you! Cheers, Connie

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/9/2015 4:11:00 PM

Connie, congratulations on your wonderful win! Your words painted this lovely visual so well, and the last line was stunning. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 12:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Sandra. I enjoyed this contest and all the entries. Hugs, Connie

David Fisher

Date: 2/9/2015 7:25:00 AM

A beautiful description, Connie...and a winner indeed!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/10/2015 12:30:00 AM

Thank you so much David. I appreciate your comment. Cheers, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2015 5:26:00 PM

Painting a picture with words..Monet would be proud..Way to go with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 7:57:00 PM

That would be a real gift Sara. Thank you very much for your sweet comment. Hugs, Connie

Constance La France

Date: 2/8/2015 1:39:00 PM

Connie, congratulations on your win with this breathtaking and magical write inspired by a beautiful picture, well done, and thanks so much for visiting my poetry ~~

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thank you for such a lovely comment Constance. I appreciate this very much. Cheers, Connie

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/8/2015 10:14:00 AM

Your words are witty and imitative painting a many colored canvas of sights and textures that the reader can enjoy through your eyes. Emile. #7

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:40:00 AM

OH, thank you so much for your insightful comment Emile. Cheers, Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2015 10:14:00 AM

Such a glorious poem to match such a gorgeous scene....."angels taking flight" ...yes !! Congratulations Connie !!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:38:00 AM

Thank you very much Carrie. Those clouds look like they have angel wings. I loved the pictures Andrea chose for this contest. Cheers, Connie

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:17:00 AM

One of my favorites!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Richard. There are so many beautiful sijos, I feel honored. Cheers, Connie

John Lawless

Date: 2/8/2015 4:55:00 AM

Nicely done Connie, Monet would be proud.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:49:00 AM

This posting twice was happening to me too last night. It seemed to be going haywire. Thank you for such a lovely comment. It is much appreciated. Cheers, Connie

John Lawless

Date: 2/8/2015 4:55:00 AM

Nicely done Connie, Monet would be proud.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/8/2015 4:36:00 AM

Monet’s Artist's Garden wow my fav. Love Connie. Congrats on win...rajat

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:51:00 AM

Oh, thank you very much Rajat. I loved the picture. Cheers, Connie

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/8/2015 4:26:00 AM

lovely visual, Connie. Congrats. Mohan

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Mohan. Cheers, Connie

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 4:08:00 AM

Hi Connie! I love the imagery in this lovely sijo, and I'm captivated by the final line! Congratulations...very deserved! (I posted mine at the last minute when 2 spots were available....fastest poem I ever wrote!) Have a nice day! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 4:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul. I loved your entry. This is the first Sijo I have ever attempted so I am very pleased to be on the winner's list. Cheers, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 12:46:00 AM

good thing you got this in. I know how worried you were to not make it into the contest. You chose what I deemed to be the prettiest of all the pictures and your last line nailed it for me. Congrats on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/8/2015 4:16:00 AM

Thank you VERY much Andrea. I am so happy you liked it enough to put it on your winner's list. I thought this picture was the most beautiful too. Hugs, Connie XXXOOO