'vivacity'

two silhouettes visible
tentative strokes all over
tantalizing mood created...

pure vivacity   












*Not a contest entry*

fantasypassiondodoitsu

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James Fraser

January 18, 2011 at 1:08 PM

Just beautiful Wilma, class poetry at it's best....:)

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 5:19 AM

lovely write my dear, one might say spicy lol.....luv Michael

David Smalling

January 17, 2011 at 2:04 AM

Passionate and discrete ... an interesting personality.

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 11:13 AM

Gosh, rereading this I can't decide which is better. Perhaps one could be for Michael's contest and the other for John's. This seems like one that would really appeal to John, but all your doiditsu poems are winners in my book. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 10:16 AM

You should reconsider and enter this one in the contest, Wilma. It's awesome! Sensual and provocative. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

January 16, 2011 at 9:03 AM

Nicely written, Wilma! This would be serve well as a contest entry though! Enjoy your new week!...Gert:)

Sara Kendrick

January 15, 2011 at 3:32 PM

Good one that is contest worthy...Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 15, 2011 at 3:03 PM

Nice sensual and spicty write with alliteration in between, Wilma,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 15, 2011 at 2:39 PM

oh why not Wilma..this is oh so intense.. great words ... u should enter it for John's if u already entered one for Michael..my friend.. truly lovely lines... I am there!!