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Doctor blinks, breath caught, face goes still. “Oh,” he says, voice sharp, split. Hands tremble near charts, numbers all wrong. Room spins quiet, cold like a grave. Chest tightens, heartbeat thuds, loud, slow. How long have I lived this broken? Sick laughs die. Fear lives in bone.

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Date: 4/20/2025 9:11:00 PM
your voice is wholly and absolutely, yours - beautifully composed
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Amanda Nolan
Date: 4/20/2025 9:24:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

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