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Vistas of the Fall

Spectrum of foliage, Kaleidoscope canopy: Tranquil reflections.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/3/2009 10:24:00 AM
pretty, good one!!
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Date: 10/31/2009 2:43:00 PM
Love the 2nd line here ... amazing how we can get 7 syllables ... smile ... great imagery here!!
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Date: 10/31/2009 1:17:00 PM
Original
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Date: 10/31/2009 8:38:00 AM
Isn't Kaleidoscope a kool word, nice piece again Raul >> James
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Date: 10/31/2009 7:43:00 AM
Lovely words, Raul, excellent writing.. keep at it ... bringing it to life.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/31/2009 6:08:00 AM
Beautiful relections and awesime imagery! Brilliant Haiku, Raul! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/30/2009 8:09:00 PM
Hi Raul, I love this...so beautiful and peaceful...Marty
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Date: 10/30/2009 7:10:00 PM
Nice poem very peaceful. Thanks for the placement and congrats in your contest. Pam.
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Date: 10/30/2009 6:47:00 PM
line 2 blows me away! wow! and thanks for honoring me, Raul, jim
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:11:00 PM
Great Haiku. Thanks Raul for sponsoring the contest and your kind words. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2009 6:47:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in this write. Lovely God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:51:00 PM
Thanks for this serene spectrum..i needed it..beautiful,love the second verse my friend--Charma
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:15:00 PM
What a peaceful feeling poem--a delight to read. The title works well with the poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 10/29/2009 12:08:00 PM
Good autumn Haiku. I can see the Kaleidoscope. Keep writing. Sara
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