Vistas of the Fall

Spectrum of foliage,
Kaleidoscope canopy:
Tranquil reflections.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 10:24 AM
pretty, good one!!
Mason Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Love the 2nd line here ... amazing how we can get 7 syllables ... smile ... great imagery here!!
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Original
Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Isn't Kaleidoscope a kool word, nice piece again Raul >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Lovely words, Raul, excellent writing.. keep at it ... bringing it to life.. Linda-Marie
Gass Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 6:08 AM
Beautiful relections and awesime imagery! Brilliant Haiku, Raul! Love, Robin
Owens Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Hi Raul, I love this...so beautiful and peaceful...Marty
Griffiths Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Nice poem very peaceful. Thanks for the placement and congrats in your contest. Pam.
Goff Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 6:47 PM
line 2 blows me away! wow! and thanks for honoring me, Raul, jim
Johnson Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Great Haiku. Thanks Raul for sponsoring the contest and your kind words. Love, Joyce
Babcock Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 6:47 PM
Wonderful imagery in this write. Lovely God Bless Phyl
Chircop Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Thanks for this serene spectrum..i needed it..beautiful,love the second verse my friend--Charma
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October 29, 2009 at 2:15 PM
What a peaceful feeling poem--a delight to read. The title works well with the poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Good autumn Haiku. I can see the Kaleidoscope. Keep writing. Sara
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