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i see you there beneath moon's lambent light blending within shadows on half lit walls wry faces of those that are lost from sight ascending voices heard within night's squalls why is it you only come out at night pretending to whisper through winded calls? those yawls fall silent at the break of dawn rose skies arise within its blend you're gone june 24 2019 Rima Ottava sponsored by Charles Messina

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Date: 7/1/2019 3:29:00 PM
Very well done Sandra. I really like this poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thank you so much for entering...Hugs Charlie :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/1/2019 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for the honor of a win... my muse rarely does rhyme, it’s always been a struggle for me so this win means a lot. Thanks for hosting the contest :). Hugs
Date: 6/24/2019 9:31:00 PM
what a flowing piece , sandra.. i hardly noticed the necessary rhyme requirement... delighted!...huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/25/2019 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Nette, it was a tough one to write hugs
Date: 6/24/2019 2:38:00 PM
This wonderful poem gave me chills in its spectacular ending! I loved this Sandra! xxoo. : )
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/24/2019 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Connie....it was a hard piece to write I am glad you enjoyed it :) hugs Sandy
Date: 6/24/2019 1:07:00 PM
Bravo, Sandra, Awesome.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 6/24/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Line, this challenge was a tough one for me!!!!

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