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colorful doorsteps as autumn knocks at the door... leaves blown by wind's breath Heidi Sands 9/12/22 Placed 2nd in the Autumn in Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Checked by Howmanysyllables.com

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2022 5:28:00 PM

Thanks for the beautiful vicarious experience you shared through your lovely nature haiku my dear friend Heidi. Would love to step on that door and I love this awesome haiku a lot too. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2022 3:29:00 AM

Thank you for the kind comment Len :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2022 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2022 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I appreciate your support :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/8/2022 12:35:00 PM

Hello Heidi, All those seasons recalled in a Haiku called visitor. Your poem reminded me of the best seasons, feeling alive. Maybe why so many find fall such a special time. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2022 1:14:00 PM

Hi Richard. It is nice to see your positive feedback. Yes, fall can be a special time. I hope your day is going well. Thank you :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/26/2022 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful picture of the doorsteps covered in fall leaves. Congratulations

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2022 3:37:00 PM

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/25/2022 1:54:00 AM

A delightful offering, Heidi. Congratulations on your fine win. // Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/25/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul. I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 9/22/2022 2:35:00 PM

Wonderful depiction of nature. Magnificent Haiku! Congratulations on your win, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2022 2:50:00 PM

Thank you very much it is nice to see your comment today :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/20/2022 8:25:00 PM

Lovely image of autumn leaves carpeting the doorsteps. Congratulations Heidi....

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2022 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Valsa :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/20/2022 6:38:00 PM

Great image, Heidi . Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2022 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/20/2022 10:40:00 AM

Heidi, I love the images created by your seasonal haiku!! Beautiful!! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/21/2022 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Wednesday. xoxo. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2022 7:53:00 AM

- A wonderful haiku, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2022 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2022 11:20:00 PM

Excellent hiaku, Heidi, congratulation.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/19/2022 5:27:00 AM

Thank you Harry :)

Md Johnson

Date: 9/18/2022 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement. - MDJ

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 7:54:00 AM

Thank you very much MDJ :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Heidi! Linda

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Linda :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/18/2022 6:28:00 AM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 6:33:00 AM

Thank you Joseph! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/18/2022 3:50:00 AM

Heidi, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku, love the last line!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 4:44:00 AM

Thank you very much Tania :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:45:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 4:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Christuraj :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/17/2022 9:03:00 AM

So lovely, dearest Heidi. Blessings.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2022 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios ! Blessings :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2022 5:40:00 PM

Autumn knocks with colors, Lovely write Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2022 5:14:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 9/13/2022 1:44:00 AM

A good autumn poem. Well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2022 5:40:00 AM

Thank you Jeanette. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2022 8:00:00 PM

Love the visuals and the tactile in this one, Heidi. Nice penning. Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2022 5:40:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. Cheers :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/12/2022 6:39:00 PM

Loved this one Heidi. Clever theme you have written...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2022 5:39:00 AM

Thank you Michael. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope your day goes well :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/12/2022 2:04:00 PM

Winds blowing colors of autumn--a welcome visitor that brings joy. Well written, haiku, Heidi. Best to you.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2022 2:39:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay. I am grateful for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice evening :)