Heidi Sands Poet Haiku

Visitor

colorful doorsteps
      as autumn knocks at the door...
       leaves blown by wind's breath

Heidi Sands

9/12/22

Placed 2nd in the  Autumn in Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Checked by Howmanysyllables.com

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Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 5:28 PM Thanks for the beautiful vicarious experience you shared through your lovely nature haiku my dear friend Heidi. Would love to step on that door and I love this awesome haiku a lot too. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs Heidi Sands October 11, 2022 at 3:29 AM Thank you for the kind comment Len :)

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2022 at 7:03 AM Congratulations on this winning work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Way to go. Sara Heidi Sands October 10, 2022 at 9:11 AM Thank you Sara. I appreciate your support :)

Quoth Theraven October 8, 2022 at 12:35 PM Hello Heidi, All those seasons recalled in a Haiku called visitor. Your poem reminded me of the best seasons, feeling alive. Maybe why so many find fall such a special time. -Richard Heidi Sands October 8, 2022 at 1:14 PM Hi Richard. It is nice to see your positive feedback. Yes, fall can be a special time. I hope your day is going well. Thank you :)

Sotto Poet September 26, 2022 at 2:44 PM Beautiful picture of the doorsteps covered in fall leaves. Congratulations Heidi Sands September 26, 2022 at 3:37 PM Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment :)

Paul Callus September 25, 2022 at 1:54 AM A delightful offering, Heidi. Congratulations on your fine win. // Regards // paul Heidi Sands September 25, 2022 at 9:18 AM Thank you very much Paul. I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Irfanulla Shariff September 22, 2022 at 2:35 PM Wonderful depiction of nature. Magnificent Haiku! Congratulations on your win, Heidi. Heidi Sands September 22, 2022 at 2:50 PM Thank you very much it is nice to see your comment today :)

Valsa George September 20, 2022 at 8:25 PM Lovely image of autumn leaves carpeting the doorsteps. Congratulations Heidi.... Heidi Sands September 21, 2022 at 7:38 AM Thank you Valsa :)

Eve Roper September 20, 2022 at 6:38 PM Great image, Heidi . Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend Heidi Sands September 21, 2022 at 7:37 AM Thank you Eve :)

Mike Gentile September 20, 2022 at 10:40 AM Heidi, I love the images created by your seasonal haiku!! Beautiful!! Happy Tuesday xxoo Heidi Sands September 21, 2022 at 7:37 AM Thank you Mike. Happy Wednesday. xoxo. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 19, 2022 at 7:53 AM - A wonderful haiku, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands September 19, 2022 at 1:18 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman September 18, 2022 at 11:20 PM Excellent hiaku, Heidi, congratulation. Heidi Sands September 19, 2022 at 5:27 AM Thank you Harry :)

MD Johnson September 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your placement. - MDJ Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 7:54 AM Thank you very much MDJ :)

Linda Alice Fowler September 18, 2022 at 7:10 AM Congratulations on your win Heidi! Linda Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 7:21 AM Thank you Linda :)

Joseph May September 18, 2022 at 6:28 AM Dropping back with Congrats on your win Heidi Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 6:33 AM Thank you Joseph! :)

Tania Kitchin September 18, 2022 at 3:50 AM Heidi, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku, love the last line! Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 4:44 AM Thank you very much Tania :)

Christuraj Alex September 17, 2022 at 7:45 PM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations! Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 4:43 AM Thank you very much Christuraj :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 17, 2022 at 9:03 AM So lovely, dearest Heidi. Blessings. Heidi Sands September 17, 2022 at 12:25 PM Thank you Demetrios ! Blessings :)

Joseph May September 14, 2022 at 5:40 PM Autumn knocks with colors, Lovely write Heidi Heidi Sands September 15, 2022 at 5:14 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Daisy Meadows September 13, 2022 at 1:44 AM A good autumn poem. Well done. Heidi Sands September 13, 2022 at 5:40 AM Thank you Jeanette. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Gershon Wolf September 12, 2022 at 8:00 PM Love the visuals and the tactile in this one, Heidi. Nice penning. Cheers, Gershon Heidi Sands September 13, 2022 at 5:40 AM Thank you Gershon. Cheers :)

Michael Tor September 12, 2022 at 6:39 PM Loved this one Heidi. Clever theme you have written... Heidi Sands September 13, 2022 at 5:39 AM Thank you Michael. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope your day goes well :)

Vijay Pandit September 12, 2022 at 2:04 PM Winds blowing colors of autumn--a welcome visitor that brings joy. Well written, haiku, Heidi. Best to you. Heidi Sands September 12, 2022 at 2:39 PM Thank you very much Vijay. I am grateful for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice evening :)