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Written during a four week stay in my old neighborhood on the island of Martha's Vineyard

The wide porch with
its green wicker furniture
looks out on the little park
that splits the street. 
Great gnarled oak trees
stand guard over
the weathered benches
scattered here and there.
Veterans these oaks are,  	
many with amputated limbs
after untold years of
nor’easters and hurricanes,
but still standing tall.
A new generation of squirrels
plays tag up and down 	
the trunks and branches.
I pretend I am on my old porch
(just a few blocks away),
sitting on the blue and white
striped cushions of my glider,
looking out at the park
with its great oaks that
split that street in two.
Now I am a visitor; I refuse 
to say I am a tourist.
I am still an islander,	
though I now live far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/18/2021 10:46:00 AM
Barbara, your poem resonates with me greatly! I love when I am able to experience the feelings that you so eloquently describe . Sometimes it only in my mind but I am a visitor nonetheless ! Happy Monday!!
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Date: 10/18/2021 2:27:00 PM
How kind of you to say such nice things. I had the chance to spend four weeks on Martha's Vineyard in my old neighborhood, and that is what occasioned this poem. I am home again, but the visit was great.
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